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China pollution is serious in china, i think the most serious environmental problem is the air pollution, water pollution, land desertification,soil erosion. i think the earth temperature rises is the most serious.after evaporation temperatures, more intense, so will cause drought. temperatures, glacier melt after, sea level will rise, a direct impact on peoples life. i think, water can be recycled. because water is limited resources, is not renewable, water recycling is a waste, and energy saving. in everyday life, there are many waste of resources. for example, many the use of disposable chopsticks, disposable plastic bags, waste water etc. useful things. above all, want to improve peoples massive propaganda, enlightenment and understanding, strengthen the consciousness of environmental protection. next, want to undertake recycling of forest trees, reduce the deforestation. strengthen the white pollution treatment, use less plastic products. finally, to make improvement. make clean city. a more orderly daizhuanghua garbage. this can not only reduce the sanitation workers less workload, still can better play recycling, reduce pollution and save resources. buy vegetables, use less plastic bags, try to use bamboo basket. eating out as far as possible need not disposable lunch boxes.

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China pollution is serious

In China, i think the most serious environmental problem is the air pollution, water pollution, land desertification, and soil erosion. I think the rising of the Earth's temperature rises is the most serious. It causes after additional water evaporation temperatures, more intense, so will cause that could lead to drought. As temperatures increase, glaciers melt after, sea levels will rise and directly direct impact on peoples' lives.
I think water can should be recycled because water is a limited resource. It is not renewable. Recycling water reduces waste and saves energy. recycling is a waste, and energy saving. In everyday life, there are many resources wasted of resources. For example, many of the use of disposable chopsticks, disposable plastic bags, waste water etc. useful things. above all, want to improve peoples massive propaganda, enlightenment and understanding, strengthen the consciousness of environmental protection. (这一句不明白你的意思。可以用中文解释吗?)
Next, I hope that we take care of want to undertake recycling of forest trees, reduce the deforestation, strengthen improve the white pollution treatment, and use less plastic products. (white pollution 是什么?)
Finally, to make improvements, make clean the city and have more orderly daizhuanghua garbage disposal and pickup. This will not only reduce the workload of sanitation workers less workload, but can improve still can better play recycling, reduce pollution and save resources. Everyone should buy vegetables, use less plastic bags, and try to use bamboo baskets. eating out as far as possible need not disposable lunch boxes. When eating out, we should also try our best to not use disposable lunch boxes.


兄弟,每一个句子的头一个字要大写。其他的就是语法多注意。加油。

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