Hello! I'm an English learner. Could you please help me correct the errors in this article?Thanks!
I always remember the act of kindness a policeman shows
me when I was about 8 years old in 1969. I used to wet
the bed frequent as a child. Depending on how angry my
mum was, I often would be sent to school with breakfast
or bath as a punishment.
On the way school I'd often meet with this policemen
from Bankstown. He would ask me, "Have you had the
breakfast today?" When "no" would be his answer, he'd
give me a hotdog. What I loved that hotdog! I happily
walked off to school to drink some milk but water. I'm
now 55 but I still haven't forgot it.
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Hello!
I'm an English learner. Could you please help me correct the errors in this article?Thanks!
I always remember the act of kindness a policeman showed me when I was about 8 years old in 1969. I used to wet the bed frequently as a child. Depending on how angry my mum was, I would often be sent to school without breakfast or bath as a punishment.
On the way to school I'd often meet with this policemen from Bankstown. He would ask me, "Have you had breakfast today?" When "no" would be my answer, he'd give me a hotdog. How I loved that hotdog! I happily walked off to school to drink some milk or water.
I'm now 55 but I still haven't forgot it.
Hello Tom,
Well told story even if the subject is tough! Many people in the west will be shocked by it. There are just a few corrections in this story and I have put sentences together to make paragraphs.
Hope this helps
Bob
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