The weather outside.
When I got up in the morning and came to the window I saw lots of snow laying on the earth outside. Perhaps it has been snowing all night and little snowflakes were still falling down at that moment. The temperature is five degree bellow zero now, so in my view it's the best weather for this part of the year. But I don't think that those people who need to drive to the work on their own cars today agree with me in this question.
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The weather outside.
When I got up in the morning and went came to the window I saw lots of snow lying on the ground earth outside. Perhaps it had been snowing all night and little snowflakes were still falling down at that moment. The temperature is five degrees bellow zero now, so in my view it's the best weather for this time part of the year. But, I don't think that those people who need to drive themselves to the work on their own cars today agree with me in this question.1
The Weather Outside.
When I got up [in the]/this morning and went/[came] to the window I saw lots of snow (laying) on the ground/[earth] outside. Perhaps it had been snowing all night, and little snowflakes were still falling down (at that moment). The temperature is five degrees bellow zero now, so in my view it's the best weather for this [part]/time of (the) year. But I don't think that those people who need to drive to (their) work on in their own cars today will/would agree with me in about this question.[ . . ] better alternative words in blue
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