The biggest change in my life.
I changed my past-time job in September. This is the biggest change in my life recently. I have been stared the job for three months , but I still not sure that the job adapt me or not. Sometimes I have the rough time in the work hour ,that will make me feel uncomfortable and don't want to do the job , and in the relaxing time I will annoy about that.
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The biggest change in my life.
I changed my past-time job in September. This is the biggest change in my life recently. I have been stared in the job for three months , but I still not sure that the job adapt me or not whether I have adapted to my new job or not. Sometimes I have the a rough time in the work hour during the working day, that will make this makes (present tense because you are talking about the current situation, not the future)me feel uncomfortable and to the point that I ('and' is not too bad here, but 'to the point where' sounds better. It means so uncomfortable to a level that you don't want to do the job)don't want to do the job. in the relaxing time I will annoy In my free time I get annoyed (we don't really use 'in my relaxing time' as a phrase. In my free time is better, or you could say 'when I am relaxing')about that.Want to progress faster?
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