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make a complaint about canteen's service There are some significant sanitary problems that we must pay much attention to, such as the unhealthy food, and the uncomfortable environment. All of this have a remarkable influence on students’ health. For instance, when I was walking around and searching for a meal at yesterday noon, I noticed that many foods were just exposed on the air in our canteen instead of taking adequate protective measures. In addition, our dining table are not as clean as we expect and some disgusting things have always been left without any cleaning.

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make a complaint about a/the canteen's service

There are some significant sanitary problems that we must pay much attention to, such as the unhealthy food, and the uncomfortable environment. All of this have has a remarkable influence on students’ health. For instance, when I was walking around and searching for a meal at noon yesterday noon, I noticed that many foods were just exposed on to the air in our canteen. instead of taking Adequate protective measures were not taken. In addition, our dining tables are not as clean as we expect and some disgusting things have always been left without any cleaning.


Really great job, Nicole! Everything I've noticed is just minor things like word order and prepositions. I split one of your sentences into two because the subject "foods" didn't agree with the verb "(were) taking protective measures." You could have also written, "I noticed that many foods were just exposed to the air instead of being handled with adequate protective measures. Finally, if you're focused on British English, canteen is fine. FYI in the US, cafeteria or dining hall is much more common. Keep up the good work!

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