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About non-traditional family unit. Nowadays the conception of traditional family is changing. It is possible find different models of non-traditional family that was unthinkable one generation ago. First, people don´t stand with same partner all life, a result the members of the families are dispersed and likely don´t have the same bonds. Others aspects are the increasing number of mix-raced and gay married families. I want to write about well-know family that she was a single mother, when she had twenty-five-, and she got married, when her daughter had ten years old, with a separated African man with one son of twenty years old. The relation was perfect but they couldn´t have their own sons, so they was too older. They took a decision to adopt a child ten year old, from Ukraine. At this moment, the relationship between the children is fantastic therefore they are step-brother with different nationalities. People attitude toward that family are complete acceptable, and the children don´t have any problem of integration in Spanish society. In conclusion: As result of globalization, the society is changing very quickly and every day you can find divers non-traditional family, which will have been traditional families in the next future.

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About non-traditional family units.

Nowadays the concept of the traditional family is changing. It is possible find different models of non-traditional families that were unthinkable a generation ago.
First, people do not stay with same partner for life, as a result the members of the families are dispersed and it is likely that they don´t have the same bonds. Others aspects are the increasing number of mix-raced and gay married families.
I want to write about well-known family. that She was a single mother, when she had twenty-five years old. She got married, when her daughter was ten years old,  to a separated African man with one son of twenty years old.
The relationship was perfect but they could not have children of their own sons, so because they was too old. They took the decision to adopt a child of ten years old, from the Ukraine.
At the moment, the relationship between the children is fantastic. therefore They are step-children* with different nationalities. Peoples attitude towards that family are complete acceptance, and the children do not have any problem with integration into the Spanish society.
In conclusion: As result of globalization, the society is changing very quickly and every day you will find diverse non-traditional families, which will become traditional families in the next future.

* There was a girl and a boy, therefore they cannot be referred to as 'brothers'. In this case we use the term children.

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About non-traditional family units.

Nowadays the conception of traditional family is changing. It is possible to find different models of non-traditional family  units that were unthinkable one generation ago.
First, people don´t stay with the same partner all their life.  As a result the members of the families are dispersed and likely don´t have the same bonds. Others aspects are the increasing number of mix-raced and gay married families.
I want to write about a  well-known family,   She was a single mother.  When she was twenty-five she got married to a separated African man with one son of twenty years old.. Her daughter was ten years old.
The relation was perfect but they couldn´t have their own sons, as they were too old. They took a decision to adopt a  ten year old child from the Ukraine.
Currently, the relationship between the children is fantastic therefore they are step-brother with different nationalities. People's attitude towards that family are completely acceptable and the children don´t have any problem with integration into Spanish society.
In conclusion: As result of globalization, the society is changing very quickly and every day you can find divers non-traditional families, which will become traditional families in the near future.

Carlos, I think you want to remove the non-traditional since you are showing us different models which your conclusion states will become the norm in the future . I am not sure what you want to say about the relationship between the step-brother and sister (and the one from the Ukraine).  I would write something like the relationship between the children is wonderful despite their different nationalities/original cultures.

Non  traditional families - Define them first.

Divorced parents - mother/father bringing up children on their own

Unmarried mothers

Mixed race

Gay married 

Your example is great for showing that an unmarried mum and divorced man both with children from other cultures can get on well together and be accepted in Spanish society.

Hope that helps




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