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Flaming Soul Previously, I have watched a Flamenco dancing show. I was quite impressed by the outstanding performance. At the beginning, I was attracted by its unique music. It differed from other type of music. Its melody carried various emotions and it penetrated through my soul. All my feelings burst out and I felt like I was set free. It also possessed a strong sense of rhythm which like a magical drug that made me sway to the music and leave all the trouble and burdens behind. What’s more, I was shock by the stunning performers. Their solemn facial expressions, their gestures and movements conveyed their wild passion and perseverant power of life. Through dancing, dancers show people dignity, pride, tenacity, elegance and sophisticate skills. Its unexpressive beauty and mysterious force struck my heartstring. In addition, I loved that gorgeous costume that dancers wore when they performed on the stage, too. The elaborate costume made the performers look more brilliant in show and created a feast for spectators’ eyes. Flamenco dancing is such an exquisite combination of techniques and art. It is so charming that many people around the world highly appreciate it. I am no exception as well.

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Flaming Soul

Previously, I have watched a Flamenco dancing show. I was quite impressed by the outstanding performance.
At the beginning, I was attracted by its unique music. It differed from other type of music. Its melody carried various emotions and it penetrated through my soul. All my feelings burst out and I felt like I was set free. It also possessed a strong sense of rhythm which like a magical drug that made me sway to the music and leave all the trouble and burdens behind.

What’s more, I was shock by the stunning performers. Their solemn facial expressions, their gestures and movements conveyed their wild passion and perseverant power of life. Through dancing, dancers show people dignity, pride, tenacity, elegance and sophisticate skills. Its unexpressive beauty and mysterious force struck my heartstring.
In addition, I loved that gorgeous costume that dancers wore when they performed on the stage, too. The elaborate costume made the performers look more brilliant in show and created a feast for spectators’ eyes.

Flamenco dancing is such an exquisite combination of techniques and art. It is so charming that many people around the world highly appreciate it. I am no exception as well.

There are some spelling and grammatical errors.

The first line: I was really, fairly, rather, very impressed.

The Second line: I was drawn by its unique music. Other types of music.

The second paragraph: I was shocked by the stunning performers. Perseverance power, the show, inexpressive beauty. 

 

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