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summary As we know, Premier League is a world the most profitable league. So the price for the ticket must be really high. In new season, things begin change, the tickets price become lower than before, the average price lower 6percents, there are 34percents club decrease they price. In my perspective, premier league has already earn 8.3billion pounds by TV, and for themselves, club wants to absorb more fans, increase they impact through decline they ticket price, it is a really good way to achieve, and the fans are also really happy.

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As we know, the Premier League is the world's the most profitable league. So the price of tickets must be really high.

In new season, things begin to change, the tickets price become lower than before. The average price is 6 percent lower, and 34 percent of clubs decreased their price. In my perspective, the premier league has already earned 8.3billion pounds from TV. Each club wants to attract more fans for themselves, . If they increase the numbers through reducing their ticket prices, it is a really good way to achieve this, and the fans are also really happy.


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