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Watching three movies I heard the sound of opening the door from the next room in early morning, then I noticed I'd fell asleep without turning off the light. Sorry mates. After then, I couldn't sleep even though it was 5 a.m. this means I'd slept just 4 hours. Actually, Friday evening is busy for waiters as restaurant, so I wanted to take a rest longer but I couldn't. I gave up to try staying in the bed. I ate breakfast and watched two movie it is becoming a kind of routine. the both movie were so great! I love both of them. The previous story was about the boy who really love playing basket ball god a cancer. I cried more than four times during the movie. The other movie "In Her Shoes" was nice as well. I felt so good from the beginning the day! I studied English grammar and went to work. It was pretty busy as I thought because many group of customer come there at the almost same time. I got tired so I went back home quickly. When I got home it was already 12 a.m. but my roommates were still awake. I talked with one of them called Patrick about staying in Japan, since he is going to Japan as studying abroad for two years. So we compered about the cost for everything of living in Japan and in Australia. When we noticed the time was already 1a.m. we went to bed. Actually, I didn't go, I started watching movie again. That's sound crazy though.

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Watching three movies

I heard the sound of opening the door opening from the next room in the early morning, then I noticed I'd fell fallen asleep without turning off the light. Sorry mates. After then that, I couldn't sleep even though it was 5 a.m. tThis means I'd slept just 4 hours. Actually, Friday evening is busy for waiters as at restaurants, so I wanted to take a rest longer but I couldn't. I gave up to trying to staying in the bed. I ate breakfast and watched two movies it which is becoming a kind of routine* for me. the bBoth of the movies were so great! I love both of them. The previous first story was about the a boy who really loved playing basket ball god a and got cancer. I cried more than four times during the movie. The other movie, "In Her Shoes", was nice as well. I felt so good from the beginning the day! I studied English grammar and went to work. It was pretty busy as I thought expected because many groups of customers come came there at the almost same time. I got tired so I went back home quickly. When I got home it was already 12 a.m. but my roommates were still awake. I talked with one of them called Patrick about staying in Japan, since he is going to Japan as to studying abroad for two years. So we compered compared notes** about the cost for everything of living in Japan and in Australia. When we noticed the time was already 1a.m. we went to bed. Actually, I didn't go, I started watching a movie again. That's sound crazy though.

Good writing! So happy to see your diary writing is active again. The most important advice I can give you from this Diary Entry is: Don't forget to use plural nouns. You only made this mistake a couple times ("restaurants" "movies" "groups" "customers") but proper use of singular and plural nouns will really make a difference in sounding like a natural English speaker.

* "is becoming a kind of routine" - 素晴らしい! - This is a really good use of this expression.

** "compared notes" - This is a common expression. It doesn't literally mean comparing written notes. But it means sharing and comparing experiences.

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