My Aunt
My aunt has gone for two month by accident.I miss her.
My aunt was a beautiful and elegance woman.She always wore a red overcoat and black trousers,coiling hair up around her head in my memory.when she had a talk with me,I could smell a light flower .she was good at cooking.I like to eat vegetables because of her excellent cooking.I had a visit to her every Spring Festival.she prepared all kinds of delicious food for us.for examlpe,steamed stuffed bun,lotus root soup...All of these meterial comed from her own vegetable field.She was a fishion man.In her spare time,she grabed gift money with us.My brother said"our aunt is the same young as us".....
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My Aunt
My aunt has been gone for two months, now, because of an accident. I miss her.My aunt was a beautiful and elegant woman. In my memories of her, she always wore a red overcoat and black trousers, coiling(curling? twisting?) her hair up around her head. When she talked with me, I could faintly smell a light flowers . She was good at cooking. I like to eat vegetables because of her excellent cooking. I visited her every year for the Spring Festival. She prepared all kinds of delicious foods for us, such as steamed stuffed buns, lotus root soup, and more...All of the ingredients came from her own vegetable garden.She was a fashionable(?) woman. In her spare time, she gave us money for gifts(?). My brother once said, "Our aunt is the same age as us...."
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