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Please, check my little essay My birthday is on the 4th of April. It is a pretty good month to have a birthday. The weather is fine, not cold and not hot. The trees are green by the time. I usually bake two cake for family and colleagues the day before birthday. My husband gives me a present and a bunch of flowers in the morning when I wake up. My parents and friends congratulate me on the phone and wish me a happy birthday. I don't remember any particular last birthday, maybe it is because I didn't have a bright birthday only ordinary.

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Please, check my little essay.

My birthday is on the 4th of April. It is a pretty good month to have a birthday. The weather is fine, not cold and not hot. The trees are green by the that time. I usually bake two cakes for family and colleagues the day before my *birthday. My husband gives me a present and a bunch of flowers in the morning when I wake up. My parents and friends congratulate* call me on the phone and wish me a happy birthday. I don't remember any particular last past birthdays; maybe it is because I didn't have any bright exciting* birthdays* only ordinary*.

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*I wasn't sure if you meant that you bake cakes for them on your birthday. If so, that's very nice of you!

*We usually use congratulate for weddings, awards, and other achievements. For birthdays, we just wish someone happy birthday.

*I usually think of the word "bright" being used to describe colors or personalities. 

*Not needed, unless you really want to stress that those birthdays were not exciting.

*To avoid repeating "birthdays" more than once, you can say, "maybe it is because I didn't have any exciting ones".

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Please, check my little essay

My birthday is on the 4th of April. It is a pretty good month to have a birthday. The weather is fine then, not too cold and not too hot. The trees are green by that time. I usually bake two cakes for family and colleagues the day before my birthday, one for my family and one for my colleagues. My husband always gives me a present and a bunch of flowers on the morning of my birthday, when I wake up. And my parents and friends will congratulate me on the phone and wish me a happy birthday. I don't remember any particular last birthday clearly, maybe it is because I didn't have any particular one that was out of the ordinary. 


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