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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I'm cici, what's up? I really desire to impove my oreal English! anyway,I'm hoping to know the out side world.I wanna kow what you eats,how about ur life,what you do in ur sparetime.It's any defference between china? Is it the emplyment seriously as us?

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm (or: My name is) Cici.  What's up?  I really desire want to improve my oral English!  Anyway, I'm hoping to know the out side world.  I wanna know what you eats, how about your life is, what you do in your spare time.  Is there any difference between your life and the life in China?  Is it the unemployment issue as seriously as ours?

N.B. 
1) Please try to pay some attention on the word spellings (i.e., orthography), such as "oral", "improve", "know", "difference" and "(un)employment".

2) Please be sure to leave a space after each punctuation before starting a new sentence (or phrase).

3) For formal writing, please try to avoid abbreviations, such as "I am" instead of " I'm ".


Take care, and good weekend.  /  請多保重。祝 週末愉快。

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