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rockboy when i am a student in grade eight . i find some songs of jiaju , i like his music his style . i try to sing every song of his . and i fall into the world of this musical style. that is rock . but in his songs lots of sounds i donnt know what musical instruments play . when i am eighteen years old, i know that musical instrument is GUITAR. so i try to get a guitar .but nobody agree with me . they think music is not rice .not money . i feel so bad , but i like rock .like free like to be myself . when i am 20. i left school and find my dream . in the summer of that year i make money buy my first guitar . when i get it i feel so exsiting .in that night i unsleep .aha that feel like i find my all , like in the sky , then i learn play guitar by my book and other friends now i am a guitar teacher .but i try to write some songs and i hope everyone can listen my songs that my dream

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rockboy

When i was a student in eigth grade I found some songs by jiaju. I liked his music and his style . I tried to sing all of his songs and I fell into the world of this musical style, Rock . In his songs there were lots of sounds but I didn't know which instrument they were from. When i was eighteen years old, i found out that musical instrument was the GUITAR. so i tried to get a guitar but nobody agreed with me . They thought music is not a serious career . i felt so bad  but i still liked rock . I felt free to be myself . when i was 20. i left school and found my dream .
That summer I made enough money to buy my first guitar . when i got it i felt so excited . I didn't sleep at all that night .   It felt like I had finally found everything (aha that feel like i find my all , like in the sky ,)
  I then learned how to play guitar from a book and other friends.
Now I am a guitar teacher and also I try to write some songs. My dream is that one day everyone can listen to my songs.


Rockboy, I really liked your story but you need to make sure to use the past tense if you are talking about the past. Anyways It makes me feel good when I hear about people following their dream and being trully happy. Hope to see you on the cover of Rolling Stone one day. Rock On!

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