Chapter 1 (Harry Potter and the Chamber of secrets)
Harry Potter has gone back at your aunt and uncle for the holidays. However, they don't like him, because he is young wizard. Usually Harry argues to them, and this day isn't exception.
Today is his birthday, but your friends aren't writting for him. Besides, his relatives forgot about this celebration.
Uncle sent out Harry to his bedroom, and it there waiting for an unexpected guest.
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Chapter 1 (Harry Potter and the Chamber of secrets)
Harry Potter has gone back at to your his aunt and uncle for the holidays. However, they don't like him, because he is a young wizard. Usually Harry usually argues with them, and this today isn't an exception.Today is his birthday, but your his friends aren't writting for writing to him. Besides, his relatives forgot about this celebration.
His uncle sent out Harry to his bedroom, and it there waiting to wait there for a unexpected surprise guest.
Well done !
Ciarán
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Chapter 1 (Harry Potter and the Chamber of secrets)
Harry Potter has gone back at your aunt and uncle for the holidays. However, they don't like him, because he (1)a is young wizard. Usually Harry arguesToday is his birthday, but your friends aren't (2)writting for him. Besides, his relatives forgot about this celebration.
Uncle sent out Harry to his bedroom, and it there waiting for an unexpected guest.
Explanations:
1: You may not have known, but we use the indefinite articles "a" and "an". These are both used the same way, however, if the word that comes after it begins with a vowel (a, e, i, o, [and]u), then you are expected to use "an" (that is the only difference). If the word that comes after starts with any other letter other than "a", "e", "i", "o", or "u", you are to use the indefinite article "a".
You may see or hear Americans using "an" when the word after it is a consonant (any letter that is not a vowel), but it is wrong to do this (so don't do it!). It is important that you remember this rule if you want to sound literate.
2: You spelled the word "writing" incorrectly.
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