The only way to solve traffic problems in cities is to improve public trnasport?
Everyday people need to deal with the traffic which is one of the biggest problems in the world and each country around our planet is attemping to solve it. In this essay will conisder the root of the problem and a possible solution.
Most of people would agree that in fact public transport does not work properly because of buses in bad condition and lack of units which encorage people to take a taxi or use their own car however some people use the service are also guilty due to they do not respect the rules and want to get down in any bus stop that generates vehicular congestion.
The enormous quantity of private cars is increasing traffic in the main cities because is almost imposible that during the rush hour all of these car to circulate in the roads moreover in many cases these cars parking in anywhere , for this reason is essential create new laws to limit the use of private cars.
On the other hand traffic is causing negative effects over the population like stress due to long hours on the queues or in the buses, respiratory diseases because of car fumes and low efficiency in the work because of people arrived to their work tired and boried.
In conclusion, to solve traffic problems is necessary improve public trnasport in order to convince people that the service is better than before and isn't necessary use a private car during the week.
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The only way to solve traffic problems in cities is to improve public transport?
Everyday people need to deal with the traffic which is one of the biggest problems in the world and each country around our planet is attempting to solve it. In this essay I will consider the root of the problem and a possible solution.Most of people would agree that in fact public transport does not work properly because of buses in bad condition and the lack of units which encourages people to take a taxi or use their own car. However some people who do use the service are also guilty due to because they do not respect the rules and want to get down in any bus stop that generates vehicular congestion [no entiendo esta parte].
The enormous quantity of private cars is increasing traffic in the main cities because it is almost impossible that during the rush hour all of these cars will be able to circulate in the roads city. Moreover in many cases these cars cause problems by simply parking anywhere. For this reason it is essential to create new laws to limit the use of private cars.
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On the other hand Besides this traffic is causing having negative effects on the population like causing stress due to long hours spent in the queues or traveling in the buses. Respiratory diseases because due to of car fumes and low efficiency in the workplace because of people arriving to their workplace tired and boried stressed are some other problems caused.
In conclusion, to solve traffic problems it is necessary to improve public transport in order and to convince people that the service is better than before and that it isn't necessary use a private car during the week.
On the other hand Besides this traffic is causing having negative effects on the population like causing stress due to long hours spent in the queues or traveling in the buses. Respiratory diseases because due to of car fumes and low efficiency in the workplace because of people arriving to their workplace tired and boried stressed are some other problems caused.
In conclusion, to solve traffic problems it is necessary to improve public transport in order and to convince people that the service is better than before and that it isn't necessary use a private car during the week.
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