Who can help me to correct this letter Dear Ivy, I am glad to be your student. I hope under your help, my English will make progress. All the time, English is Greek to me. Especially spoken En

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Leon Wong

Who can help me to correct this letter Dear Ivy, I am glad to be your student. I hope under your help, my English will make progress. All the time, English is Greek to me. Especially spoken English, it is hell for me. But I have a dream, I hope I could speak English Fluently one day. So I stick to practice spoken English every morning. I believe that the more I speak, the better speaking I will be. But I ran into trouble now. Although I can speak English to the books fluently, I can't talk with others. I always forgot the words what I want to speak. what should I do? How could I overcome shyness? I would appreciate it if you could help me. I give you endless brand-new good wishes. Please accept them as a new remembrance of our lasting friendship. I am looking forward to your reply. yours sincerely, Leon

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Who can help me to correct this letter

Dear Ivy,
I am glad to be your student. I hope that with your help, my English will improve.** Right now, English is Greek to me. Especially spoken English, it is hell for me. But I dream of speaking English fluently one day. So I will stick to practicing spoken English every morning.
I believe that the more I speak, the better my speaking will become.
But I ran into trouble now. Although I can speak English well when I'm studying, I can't talk with others. I always forget the words what I want to say. What should I do? How can I overcome my shyness? I would appreciate it if you could help me.
I send you endless brand-new good wishes. Please accept them as a sign of our lasting* friendship.
I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,
Leon

**Or you could write, "I will make progress in English."

*I think you should leave out "lasting" unless you have already been friends with her for a while. If you just met her, "lasting" sounds strange.

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