DIARIY , November 4,2016
November 4,2016 Sunny
Today is my first day of keep a Diary in English.these day i feel unhappy,because i don’t know do i want. i feel void in my heart.
i don’t want to read ,i don’t want to be in love again,i don’t even want to work ,and i don’t sleep well lately.my friends and family think i am normal,in fact i feel myself very bad.i don’t know why.anyhow like a very deep hole in my heart and i don’t know how i should do to fill.i think i got depression!
No purpose to play my phone until 11:00 very night ,my eyes so tired but i don’t want to sleep,because i am frightened to start a new day. eating food i like ,i don’t feel exciting and delicious. I met my friends three days ago, she said my face look very bad ,i explained my stomach have a little uncomfortable recently.
I very clear i can’t be like be like this any more. I am just 25 years old that is very good age,should have passion and learn knowledge .nobody can save me,just myself. so i will plan to have a excursion with my a friend tomorrow ,talking、walking 、eating......
I must cheer up,the life road to i walk is very far.
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DIARIY , November 4,2016
November 4,2016 SunnyToday is my first day of keeping a Diary in English. These days I feel unhappy because I don’t know what I want. I feel a void in my heart.
i don’t want to read ,i don’t want to be in love again, i don’t even want to work , and i don’t sleep well lately. my friends and family think i am normal, in fact i feel very bad. i don’t know why. anyhow like a very deep hole in my heart and i don’t know how i should fill it. i think i am depressed!
There is no purpose to play on my phone until 11:00 very night ,my eyes are so tired but i don’t want to sleep because i am frightened to start a new day. eating food i like i don’t feel excited and it is not delicious. I met my friend three days ago, she said my face look very bad ,i explained my stomach was a little uncomfortable recently.
It is very clear that i can’t be like be like this any more. I am just 25 years old and that is very good age. I should have passion and learn something. Nobody can save me, just myself. so i plan to have a excursion with my a friend tomorrow ,talking、walking 、eating......
I must cheer up, the road of life I walk on is very long.
Very well written! I have not corrected the 'i's nor capitalised the starting letters of sentences. It would take too long.
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