A report 6-11-2016
E-LEARNING:
It is known that currently, online language courses is one of the biggest improvements in the education field. In the past, language courses were taught only in a physical place but now the situation has changed completely.
ADVANTAGES:
On the one hand , talking about the advantages of this kind of education, I would like to say that you do not need to use any transport, which sometimes is very complicated if you can not take the bus. Furthermore, online education is cheaper than traditional education because a teacher can create an online course and this course might be offered whenever the teacher wants. In addition online education is more flexible than the other kind of education.
DISADVANTAGES:
On the other hand, referring to the drawbacks, there are some of them, for instance if your internet crash... how can you attend the lesson? Or if a virus infect your computer, you have to find another , and if in your home there is no one more, there is not anything that you can do. So, all that glitters is not gold.
CONCLUSION:
To sum up, let me give you an advice, try to combine traditional methods with online methods and all would be perfect in your education.
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A report 6-11-2016
E-LEARNING:It is known that currently (currently well known that: more 'native sounding'), online language courses is one of the biggest improvements in the education field (field of education). In the past, language courses were taught only in a physical place but now the situation has changed completely.
ADVANTAGES:
On the one hand , talking about the advantages of this kind of education, I would like to say that (for making specific points it would be more native to say something like: I would make the point that)you do not need to use any transport, which sometimes is very complicated if you can not take the bus. Furthermore, online education is cheaper than traditional education because a teacher can create an online course and this course might be offered whenever the teacher wants. In addition online education is more flexible than the other kind of education.
DISADVANTAGES:
On the other hand, referring to the drawbacks, there are some of them (this phrase can be taken out), for instance if your internet crashes... how can you attend the lesson? Or if a virus infects your computer, you have to find another , and if you are in your home there is no one more (needs rephrasing- not sure of the meaning), there is not anything that you can do. So, all that glitters is not gold.
CONCLUSION:
To sum up, let me give you an (some advice: advice is uncountable) advice, try to combine traditional methods with online methods and all would (will) be perfect (perfect seems to strong an adjective) in your education.
Overall a cohesive and clear article that looks at both sides. Needs a little polishing if you want it to sound native but it makes it's points well. Good stuff!
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