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It is better to use our own knowledge or experience than to ask others for advice to solve problems.
Question: agree or disagree that It is better to use our own knowledge or experience than to ask others for advice to solve problems.
With the society becoming increasingly complicated, everyone will inevitably encounters countless problems in their dailylife daily life. When it cames comes to how to address the problems, the senior older people always recommend that you should solve the problems by yourself rather than asking ask for another's help; however, I think asking others for advice is much better with for the following reasons.
First, problems can be effcient efficiently and quickly to handled by using other's others' advice. Admittedly, solving problems with by yourself can could give you a pefound menory profound memory to remember; nonetheless, it will not only wastes you a lot of your time, but it will also limits your thinking. Take myself for as an example. It was in my senior school. I was asked to organized organize an outgoing outing to the a park in our city, where it has a long distance from my school about an hour's driving distance from my school. I ordered arranged a bus to take us, but until the evening before the departure day, the driver called me and said that he couldn't arrive come because of some other things business. I felt so upset and anxious that counldn't I couldn't find found a way. I thought for a long time, but came up with nothing. Luckily, my teacher gave advised me some advice that we could go there by bus or hold a walking competition about walking. With the teacher's advice, I addressed this problem efficiently. So it is a efficient way to ask for others' help, and which will opens your mind and saves you a lot of time.
It is better to use our own knowledge or experience than to ask others for advice to solve problems.
Question: agree or disagree that It is better to use our own knowledge or experience than to ask others for advice to solve problems.With the society becoming increasingly complicated, everyone will inevitably encounter countless problems in their daily lives, when it comes to how to solve the problems. The senior always recommend that you should solve the problems by yourself rather than asking for other's help. However, I think asking others for advice is much better with/because of the following reasons.
First, problems can be efficiently and quickly to handled by using other's advice. Admittedly, solving problems with yourself can give you a pefound menory to remember, nonetheless, it will not only waste you a lot of time, but it will also limit your thinking. Take myself for example: it was in my senior school. I was asked to organize an outgoing to the park in our city, which is like a long distance from my school. It takes about an hour of driving. I ordered a bus to get us there, but in the evening before the departure day, the driver called me and said that he couldn't arrive because of some other things. I felt so upset and anxious that couldn't find a way out, I thought for a long time but nothing came up/ended up with nothing. Luckily, my teacher gave me some advice that we could go there by bus or hold a competition about walking, and with the teacher's advice, I solved that problem efficiently. So, it is an efficient way to ask for others' help, which will open your mind/eyes and save you a lot of/a great deal of time.
Besides, asking help from others can provide you lots of opportunities to communicate with different people and enlarge your social circle. Solving a problem on your own sometimes means (that) you will spend much time alone and you will not have chances to argue with others and you may have less time to take part in school activities, consequently, you will have fewer friends and less connections with others. It is bad for you because the social skills are important for your future job. Moreover, asking for help can be a mean to get close to strangers. my cousin Mark asked for help with small things, just like borrowing a pen or asking for time, when he came to a new class where he knew nobody. It helped him a lot. So, asking for help is not only a way to solve problems, but it also can enlarge our social circle.
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Besides, asking help from others can could provide you lots of opportunities to communicate with different people and enlarge your social circle. Solving a problem on your own sometimes means you will spend much time alone, you will not have chances to argue with others and you may have less time to take part in school activities. So that will make you have results in your having fewer friends and less connection with others. It is bad for you since the social skills are important for your future job. Moreover, asking for help can be is a means to get close to strangers. For example, my cousin Mark, going to a new class where he knew no one, asked for help with small things, just liking like borrowing a pen or asking for the time, when he came to a new class where he knew nobody. It helped him a lot. So asking for help is not only a way to solve problems, but it also can enlarge our social circle.
Factors From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that asking others for advice is a better choice, in order to solve the problems in a more efficient way and enlarge our social circle.
Factors which have been discussed above can lead to the conclusion that asking others for advice is a better choice to solve the problem in a more efficient way and enlarge a social circle.
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