Driving story
It was a sunny day last weekend, I wanted to drive to a public park, the park in the little mountain. I did not know how to get there, then electronic map help me a lot. 1 hour later I have seen the mountain, how beautiful the scenery! At the same time, a pit suddenly occurred on the road, but I haven't seen it, a big shake! Fortunately I was fine, unfortunately my car a little hurt, the protect plank under head stock broken. So I have to say goodbye to beautiful scenery, and must went to professional shop to check and fix my car at first. It is my driving story with mood of gray.
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Driving story
It was a sunny day last weekend, I wanted to drive to a public park, the park in the little mountain. I did not know how to get there, then electronic map help me a lot. 1 hour later I have seen the mountain, how beautiful the scenery! At the same time, a pit suddenly occurred on the road, but I haven't seen it, a big shake! Fortunately I was fine, unfortunately my car a little hurt, the protect plank under head stock broken. So I have to say goodbye to beautiful scenery, and must went to professional shop to check and fix my car at first. It is my driving story with mood of gray.0
Driving Story
It was a sunny day last weekend, I wanted to drive to a public park which is located in a little mountain, I did not know hot to get there, then electronic map helped me a lot. 1 hour later I saw the mountain, how beautiful the scenery! At the same time, a pity(?) suddenly occurred on the road, but I hadn't seen it, a big shanke! Fortunately I was fine, unfortunately my car got a little hurt. the protect plank under head stock was broken, then I had to say goodbye to the beautiful scenery, and must go to a professional shop to check and fix my car at first. It was my driving story with mood of gray.
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must + do
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Replace these words
Help >helps
Unfortunately>unfortunately,
Head stock>headstock
Scenery, >scenery
Went > go
Only Professional not used > use the professional or a professional
Mood replace with the mood or a mood
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