Next weekend
On Friday, me and my friends will go to the beach. We all have to go to a meeting point. We are about 25 people. There will a bus that we have rented. We have to be at 6:00 a.m. On way, we will stop to eat emapanadas (it's so delicius). The trip lasts two hours on average. We will stay at hotel Playa Blanca.
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On Friday, me and my friends and I will go to the beach.
El uso de "me" como pronombre de sujeto no es estándar y suena horrible. Para el sujeto, es muy aconsejable usar los siguientes pronombres de sujeto: "I, he, she, we, they", no los pronombres de objeto "me, him, her, us, them."
Pero si se trata de un objeto directo, objeto indirecto, u objeto de preposición, entonces sí se usan "me, him, her, us, them." Ejemplos: "John saw me." "John gave me the book." "John gave the book to me."
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Next weekend
On Friday, me and my friends and I will go to the beach. We all have to go to a meeting point. We are about 25 people. There will be a bus that we have rented. We have to be there at 6:00 a.m. On the way, we will stop to eat empanadas (it's they are so delicious). The trip lasts two hours on average. We will stay at the hotel Playa Blanca Hotel.* my friends and I We consider it more polite to use this formula. You and I, my sister and I, etc.
* Playa Blanca Hotel, the word hotel is capitalized because it is the name of the hotel: the White Horse Hotel is the name of the hotel.
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Next weekend
On Friday, me and my friends and I will go to the beach. We all have to go to a meeting point. There will be about 25 people. We have rented a bus. We have to be there at 6:00 a.m. On the way we will stop to eat empanadas (they are so delicious). The trip lasts two hours on average. We will stay at hotel Playa Blanca.0
Next weekend
On Friday, me and my friends* will go to the beach. We all have to go to a meeting point. We are about 25 people. There will be a bus that we have rented. We have to be there at 6:00 a.m. On the way, we will stop to eat emapanadas (it's so delicious). The trip lasts two hours on average. We will stay at the hotel Playa Blanca.*my friends and I will ... is the formal way or more polite way to say it, although your way is very often heard.
Very well written!
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