Sunday was fantastic.
In the morning, I went to visit my best friend Lucy and her daugther Karina.We were talking about our lives and what happened with her job.She is a single mother.I made the lunch and orange juice.Afterwards,We went to the mall and we ate ice cream chocolate flavor.It was fun.After, I got home.
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Sunday was fantastic.
In the morning, I went to visit my best friend Lucy and her daugther Karina.We were talking about our lives and what happened with her job.She is a single mother.I made the lunch and orange juice.Afterwards,We went to the mall and we ate ice cream chocolate flavor chocolate flavoured/flavored ice cream.It was fun.After, I got home.Hi Juni, great story! I have only made one change, regarding the flavour of your Arabic. PS, sorry I spell flavour differently :) I think your writing is good, maybe aim to make your sentences longer in the future
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