People think the arts are not important
Arts are not only panting nor sculptures. There are many types of arts such as “ Music, panting, plays, movies and dancing” Many museums around the world have been established to preserve the history. This is the main goal and objective to the museum. Preservation of artifacts from looting. These artifacts indicate and illuminate how the ancestors lived as well as the previous generation life. Some people think that the government is squandering money on arts and should that money be spent on somewhere else. They ask why much money spend on museum, why does contrary conduct festivals and some awards for arts. A few people think if that money was spent on poor and homeless would be better. Can enhance the education system for example. But how we can improve the education system without knowing the history of human being. Look at the Egyptian civilization you can find every aspect of their life was being dairy on the walls of temples. Arts are part of our history and help us to know our future.
My opinion the government should spend much money on arts, because arts are our life, if arts were something frivolous we would not know anything about human being and how to enhance our future.
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Arts are part of our history and help us to (you can keep to or remove it- both are correct) know our future.
In my opinion, the government should spend much money on arts, because arts are our life,.If arts were something frivolous (I don't understand the word frivolous) we would not know anything about human beings and how to enhance our future.
يعطيك العافية عمل جميل وفعلا الفنون جدا مهمة للشعوب وهي جزء من هويتنا.
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Some People think the arts are not important
Arts are not only pantings nor and sculptures . There are many types of arts such as “ music, panting, plays, movies, and dancing” . Many museums around the world have been established to preserve the history. This is the main goal and objective to of the a museum. Preservation of artifacts from looting (this sentence id not clear). These artifacts indicate and illuminate how the ancestors lived as well as the and previous generation life lived. Some people think that the government is squandering money on arts and should that money should be spent on somewhere else You can either say on something else OR say: somewhere else (without the word no) . Since you are talking in general and not about a specific government it is better to avoid using (the government). You could say: Some people think that governments are squandering the money invested on arts and that money should be spent somewhere else. They ask: " Why much money spend is spent on museums? Why does contrary the country / or: why do countries conduct festivals and some awards for arts It is better to remove the word some: why do countries conduct festivals and awards for artes. A few (better to replace with: Some) people think that it would be better if if that money was spent on the poor and homeless would be better. Can enhance the education educational system for example this sentence is not clear: what can enhance the education system? I think you mean this: Or it can even enhance the educational system for example. But how we can can we improve the education system without knowing the history of human beings ?! Look at the Egyptian civilization you can find every aspect of their life was being dairy on the walls of temples (this sentence is not clear: what is dairy?: I think you mean this: Look at the Egyptian civilization where you can find every aspect of their lives written on the walls of the temple).Want to progress faster?
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