Strengthen the frustation Education among the College of Students
The ablity faced to the frustration of college students has been brought into our focus.Nowdays ,more and more college students because of can not bear the frustration get some diease.In addition,due to they can not have a normal heart to the frustrated,they far away from the success.Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon.
Generally speaking,the reasons is as followed.First of all ,…Moreover,…Therefore ,we have to pay a large of attention on the frustration education among the college students.
When talking about my own view,i think the more ablity you have,the more easier for you to live in this world.Futhermore,during ones life everybody will face all kinds of frusteration,Only overcome it can we get the success.In a word,strengthen the frustration education is should be started just now.
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你好Zenobia. 我想我明白你的意思。你可以这样写：
The ability for college students to face frustration has been brought to our attention. These days, more and more college students are becoming ill because they can not bear the frustration in their lives. In addition, due to the fact that they can not handle their frustrations they are far away from being successful. Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon.
Generally speaking, the reasons are as follows. (reasons were not included in your text). Therefore, we have to pay a large amount of attention to teaching college students how to handle frustration. From my own point of view, I think the more ability you have, the easier it is for you to live in this world. Furthermore, during one's life, everybody will face all kinds of frustration. Only by overcoming it can we be succesful. In short, teaching students to manage frustration should be started now.
(I continued to use frustration, but for your topic, "stress" might be a more accurate word)
The ability for college students to face frustration has been brought to our attention. These days, more and more college students are becoming ill because they can not bear the frustration in their lives. In addition, due to the fact that they can not handle their frustrations they are far away from being successful. Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon.
Generally speaking, the reasons are as follows. (reasons were not included in your text). Therefore, we have to pay a large amount of attention to teaching college students how to handle frustration. From my own point of view, I think the more ability you have, the easier it is for you to live in this world. Furthermore, during one's life, everybody will face all kinds of frustration. Only by overcoming it can we be succesful. In short, teaching students to manage frustration should be started now.
(I continued to use frustration, but for your topic, "stress" might be a more accurate word)
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親愛的，寫的挺好，但是整體感覺有點怪。但是一樓給你修改的很好，我也得到了不少的知識，哈哈。
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