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Statement
Good morning [if you're writing a formal letter, you should start with Dear Sir/Madam, or Dear Mr/Mrs if you know their name]
My name is Susana and I am writing this letter to let you know about my current situation and why this help would be beneficial to me.
Since I came to this country my first goal has been to study to get a good career and get a good future. My first language is Spanish and all my family speaks this language, therefore, my parents and I are still learning English. My father cannot get good jobs because of his low English level and his incomes is low.
My mother had a operation in her coccyx when she was younger and because of that she has never could work normally. She just had a operation the last August because she had a cyst, which became complicated because of this operation on her coccyx. I have to look after her because she usually has pain in her spine which prevents her from doing basic things. She got a statement from the doctor about her last operation and she got another statement in Spain from the doctor about her old operation, but it's in Spanish. She needs to have others tests done here and get a statement from the doctor in English. And For this reason my mother basically cannot work and So actually my father is the only one that sustains my family.
This help would be beneficial for me when I have to buy food daily in my school or when I have to use the train to get quickly to my school and sometimes my father's income isn't enough.
Well, that's all. I hope you can understand my situation and thanks (informal!!) thank you for reading my statement.
There we go :-)
Do you have any questions? I am a native speaker.
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