Oppinion essay
People with University degrees don't have more posibilities of finding a job because people with education cycle or higher level get Jobs faster tan college students.
Firstly, when you are doing a career, you must study between four and six years and on an education cycle it's about two or three years so if a company are finding people, you can't work without a university degree, then these workstations are occupied by people who have an education cycle.
Secondly, it's true that in medicine the first four years, you have a secured job, but after you fight for a Workstation like other employees, or if your boss are happy with you, he renew you the contract.
In conclusion, in this life we must be good in our profession and be lucky.
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Opinion essay
People with university degrees don't have better chances of finding a job because people with vocational training or higher level training get jobs faster than college students.Firstly, when you are starting a career, you must study between four and six years, but vocational training only takes about two or three years. If a company is hiring people and you can't work without a university degree, these jobs are taken by people who have vocational training.
Secondly, it's true that in medicine you have a secured job for the first four years, but when you fight for a job like other employees, or if your boss is happy with you, your contract will be renewed.
In conclusion, in this life we must be lucky and good in our profession.
(I am not really sure what an "education cycle" is, so I don't know whether or not "vocational training" is the best translation.)
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Oppinion essay
People with University degrees don't have more posibilities of finding a job because people with education cycle or higher level get Jobs faster tan college students.Firstly, when you are doing a career(tío lucia, en clase nos dijeron que career no lo dijeramos, ya te habías empanado), you must study between four and six years(con el tres más dos van a ser tres no tienes en cuenta la actualidad gracias a nuestro buen gobierno) and on an education cycle(te lo has inventation) it's about two or three years so if a company are finding people, you can't work(ah que hay gente que si trabaja... donde?) without a university degree(así mejor), then these workstations are occupied by people who have an education cycle(no solo te lo inventas que lo vuelves a poner, sanchiiiiissssss).
Secondly, it's true that in medicine vas a morir estudiando the first four years, you have a secured job, but after you fight for a Workstation like other employees(salvo si haces trabajos extras al jefe jusjus), or if your boss are happy with you, he renew you the contract.
In conclusion, in this life we must be good in our profession and be lucky.(para suerte la mía por tenerte grrrrrr bombón)
Nota del corrector: Qué te dije de poner tu trabajo en internet? Mira que eres tramposa y gente como yo esforzándonos día a día... :(
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Es español es un ciclo formativo, pero no sabía como ponerlo y lo he traducido literalmente.
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No entiendo "education cycle". Expliqueme, por favor y voy a corregir.
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