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Today was a busy day Last night, I realized that my toilet bowl was clogged by toilet paper...I wanted to take care of it immediately but it was already 1 AM and no stores opened at that time. So I just went to bed. Today, I woke up little bit late cause it's Sunday then went to the nearest store. Unfortunately, there was no clog remover for toilet bowels so I just decided to buy a clog remover for pipes or something like that. I poured the gel type remover into the toilet bowel and covered it with the lid. Just letting it that way, I went out to meet my friend. We had burgers and some beer. After returning home, I realized that I didn't bring my key... yes, I was locked out! With a little hope, I rang the bell of my house, but my roommate was being outside. It is Sunday... but I had to call the maintenance office. Yes, it is Sunday, there was no person in charge in the office and they said they will direct me to the police department of the university housing. I waited for it but no one answers. I hung up the phone and it was time to go to the church so I gave up and went to the church. During the mass there were a couple of missed calls from the police department. When I went back home, my roommate was already there and she said the police department people had visited the house. If the police department visited, I have to pay $20... today I just lost my money for nothing. Today was really long and busy day... But wait, there is a good news, my toilet bowl has been fixed by the clog remover while I was having to stay outside since I had been locked out. This is my story today and free corrections that will make this sound more natural are always welcome!! Thank you so much!

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Today was a busy day

Last night, I realized that my toilet bowl was clogged by toilet paper...I wanted to take care of it immediately, but it was already 1 AM, and no stores were opened at that time. So I just went to bed.

Today, I woke up a little bit late because it's it was Sunday. I then went to the nearest store. Unfortunately, there was no clog remover for toilet bowels so I just decided to buy a clog remover for pipes or something like that. I poured the gel type remover into the toilet bowel and covered it with the lid.

Just letting leaving it that way, I went out to meet my friend. We had burgers and some beer.
After returning home, I realized that I didn't bring my key... yes, I was locked out!

With a little bit of hope, I rang the doorbell of my house, but my roommate was being outside out.
It is was Sunday... but so I had to call the maintenance office.
Yes, it is was Sunday; there was no person in charge in the office, and they said they will direct directed me to the police department of the for university housing. I waited for it called them, but no one answers answered. I hung up the phone, and it was time to go to the church. So I gave up and went to the church. During the mass there were a couple of missed calls from the police department.
 
When I went back home, my roommate was already there, and she said the police department people had visited the house.
If the police department visited comes by, I have to pay $20... today I just lost my money for nothing.

Today was a really long and busy day...

But wait, there is a good news; my toilet bowl has had been fixed by the clog remover while I was having to stay outside since I had been locked out.

This is my story today, and feel free to make corrections that will make this sound more natural. Such corrections are always welcome!!

Thank you so much!

I made a few suggestions to make it more natural sounding. A well written and interesting story.

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