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Looking at Nature How I like seeing everyday my two plants in one side of my table. Impatiens, in Spanish "la alegría de la casa" is one of them. Most of the time it has small pink flowers that catches the eye of the people. The other is a basil with its peculiar scent. Not only are they a part of the decoration, but the plants relaxe my sight and give me some kind of comfort. It is no wonder that some studies claim some benefits to have plants at work environment. In fact, there is a close connetion between concentration, productivity, less stress and better quality of air when plants are present. It is said that natural ornaments improve our life because approach people to nature. Consequently, the biophic design is a new tendency to incorporate nature elements in urban spaces or interiors. The purpose is to evoke the nature as much as possible through different tonality of lights, shapes that we find in nature, presence of water etc. For example, The Royal Children's Hospital - Melbourne(Australia) is a sample that biophic design helps the patients to recover more quick or In the National Australia Banck (NAB) where the absenteeism has decreased. Finally, as urban design we can mention Hig Line public park in -Manhattan (NY). Definitively, thanks for giving me those plants!!

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Looking at Nature

How I like seeing everyday my two plants in one side of my table. Impatiens, in Spanish "la alegría de la casa" is one of them. Most of the time it has small pink flowers that catches the eye of the people. The other is a basil with its peculiar scent. Not only are they a part of the decoration, but the plants relaxe my sight and give me some kind of comfort.

It is no wonder that some studies claim some benefits to have plants at work environment. In fact, there is a close connetion between concentration, productivity, less stress and better quality of air when plants are present.

It is said that natural ornaments improve our life because approach people to nature. Consequently, the biophic design is a new tendency to incorporate nature elements in urban spaces or interiors. The purpose is to evoke the nature as much as possible through different tonality of lights, shapes that we find in nature, presence of water etc.

For example, The Royal Children's Hospital - Melbourne(Australia) is a sample that biophic design helps the patients to recover more quick or In the National Australia Banck (NAB) where the absenteeism has decreased. Finally, as urban design we can mention Hig Line public park in -Manhattan (NY).

Definitively, thanks for giving me those plants!!

It is no wonder that some studies claim that some benefits to have plants can provide some benefits to the at work environment. In fact, there is a close connection relationship between concentration, productivity, less reduced stress levels and better air quality of air when plants are present. 

It is said that natural ornaments improve our life because approach as they help people to become closer to nature. Consequently, the biophilic design is a new tendency trend that to incorporates natural elements within urban spaces or interiors. The purpose is to evoke the nature as much as possible through different tonality/color schemes of lights, shapes that we find in nature, presence of water etc. 

For example,The Royal Children's Hospital in Melbourne(Australia) is a good example of how that biophilic design helps the patients to recover more quicker or In while the National Australia Bank (NAB) where the has noticed a decrease in absenteeism. has decreased. Finally, as urban design we can mention High Line public park in -Manhattan (NY) as another good example of urban design.. 

hanks for giving me those plants!!

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Looking at Nature

How I like seeing everyday my two plants on my table everyday.(OR, that are beside my table) Impatiens, in Spanish "la alegría de la casa" is one of them. Most of the time it has small pink flowers that catches peoples attention. The other is a basil with its peculiar scent. Not only are they a part of the decoration, but the plants relaxe my sight and give me some kind of comfort.

It is no wonder that some studies claim that there are some benefits to having plants in the work environment. In fact, there is a close connetion between concentration, productivity, less stress and better quality of air when plants are present.

It is said that natural ornaments improve our life because it brings people close to nature. Consequently, the biophic design is a new tendency to incorporate nature elements in urban spaces or interiors. The purpose is to evoke the nature as much as possible through different tonality of lights, shapes that we find in nature, presence of water etc.

For example, The Royal Children's Hospital - Melbourne(Australia) is an example of biophic design that helps  patients to recover more quickly another example is the National Australia Banck (NAB) where the absenteeism has decreased. Finally, another urban design that we can mention is the  Hig Line public park in -Manhattan (NY).

Definitively, thanks for giving me those plants!!

Well done Mila, I like plants as well they make a room fell warmer.

Have a great week.

 


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Looking at Nature

How I like seeing my two plants on my table everyday. One of the plants is Impatiens, or in Spanish "la alegría de la casa."  Most of the time the plant has small pink flowers that catches people's eyes. The other plant is a basil with its peculiar scent. Not only are they part of the decoration; but the plants also relax my sight and give me comfort.

It is no wonder that some studies claim that there are benefits to having plants in the work environment. In fact, there is a close connetion between concentration, productivity, less stress and better quality of air when plants are present.

It is said that natural ornaments improve our life because it brings people closer to nature. Consequently, the biophic design is a new tendency to incorporate nature elements in urban spaces or interiors. The purpose is to evoke nature as much as possible through different tonality of lights, shapes that we find in nature, and the presence of water, etc.

For example, The Royal Children's Hospital in Melbourne, Australia is an example of a biophic design that helps patients to recover more quickly; or another example is the National Australia Bank (NAB) where employee's absenteeism has decreased. Finally, another urban design that uses plants is the Hig Line Public Park in Manhattan, New York.

Definitely, thanks for giving me those plants!!

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This was a good Notebook entry. I made some corrections in grammar and to specify to the reader exactly what you are referring to. Some of the original sentences had additional words that were not needed.

Keep up the good work!


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