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I am Maxim, i was born in Moscow and i live here all my life.
I have been working a programmer after graduation of university for more than ten years.
But my hobby is the photography and the travels.
I very like to travel and to photograph the nature of countries in which i am.
I have been to Norway, to Italia, to Slovenia. I have visited Alps at last year.
But at this sommer i have been to France, to Provence region.
I had been photographing the lavender fields at sunset and at dawn, and the old cozy towns like Roussilion, Valensole and etc.
Now i want to visit Scotland, Ireland and Kamchatka in Russi
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Please, check me for mistakes
I am Maxim, I was born in Moscow and I have lived here all my life.I have been working as a programmer after graduation from university for more than ten years.
However, my hobbis (мн.число) is the photography and the travels.
I very like to travel and to photograph the nature of countries in which I am visiting.
I have been to Norway, to Italy, to Slovenia. I have visited Alps at last year.
However, at this summer I went to France, to Provence region.
I had been photographing the lavender fields at sunset and at dawn, and the old cozy towns like Roussilion, Valensole and etc.
Now I want to visit Scotland, Ireland and Kamchatka in Russia.
Отличная работа. Молодец Максим.
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Please, check me for mistakes
I am Maxim. I was born in Moscow and I have lived here all my life.I have been working as a programmer after graduating from university for more than ten years.
But my hobby is photography and traveling.
I very like to photograph the nature of the countries I travel to.
I have been to Norway, to Italy, to Slovenia. I visited the Alps at last year.
But this summer, I went to France, to the Provence region.
I had been photographing the lavender fields at sunset and at dawn, and the old cozy towns like Roussilion, Valensole and etc.
Now i want to visit Scotland, Ireland and Kamchatka in Russia
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Please, check me for mistakes
I am Maxim,and I was born in Moscow and lived here all my life.I have been working as a programmr after graduation from the University for more than ten years.
But my hobbies are photography and traveling.
I like to travel and take pictures of nature of countries in which I am visiting.
I have been to Norway, to Italia, to Slovenia. I have visited Alps at last year.
But this summer I have been to France, to Provence region.
I have been taking photographs of the lavender fields at sunset and at dawn, and the old cozy towns like Roussilion, Valensole and etc.
Now I want to visit Scotland, Ireland and Kamchatka in Russia.
Nice job, remember to capatilize I, more than two items use the plural verb form. Your travels are interesting.
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