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A wonderful park in France Me and my familly went a week end to discover the new attraction, There is a wonderful park in France "The Puy du Fou" is a historical theme park, which to discover the story of the Middle Ages. This park is also known for its night show, "Cinéscénie" which features over 1,200 volunteer actors. Among these themes, I appreciated in particular "Jean de la Fontaine imaginary world of" this story reconstruct the house and the garden which the poet had dreamed. Walkers can discover different perfomances fable of la Fontaine interpreted by animals and insects in a beautiful decor. There was also the show of The Knights of the round table, It was wonderful and magical spectacle of one hour of differents themes, combining magic with merlin, battles with the Knights and the famous story of Arthur's sword. All spectators were pleased with the shows, with actors, the scenery and costumes. That was a unforgettable days.

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A wonderful park in France

Me and my family* went at the weekend to discover a new attraction. There is a wonderful park in France "The Puy du Fou". It is a historical themed park, where one can discover the story of the Middle Ages. This park is also known for its night show, "Cinéscénie" which features over 1,200 volunteer actors. Among these themes, I appreciated in particular "Jean de la Fontaine, the imaginary world of". This story reconstructs the house and the garden which the poet had dreamed. Walkers can discover different performances of his fables interpreted by animals and insects in a beautiful decor. There was also the show of The Knights of the Round Table. It was a wonderful and magical spectacle of one hour of different themes, combining magic with Merlin, battles with the Knights and the famous story of Arthur's sword. All spectators were pleased with the shows, actors, the scenery and the costumes. It was an unforgettable weekend.

*more polite is ... My family and I went ... (although your construction is colloquial and often heard).

Very well written!

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