Diary:009
This is my diary entry 009! If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!
If you were granted one wish, what would you wish for?
→ If I were granted one wish, I would wish for a lot of money. I'm an university student now so I have a lot of my time and I want to travel as many countries as possible for my new experiences. However I don't have enough money to do so. That's why I would wish for a lot of money.
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Diary:009
This is my diary entry 009! If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!If you were granted one wish, what would you wish for?
→ If I were granted one wish, I would wish for a lot of money. I'm a university student now so I have a lot of my time and I want to travel to as many countries as possible to gain new experiences. However I don't have enough money to do so. That's why I would wish for a lot of money.
Hello Misaki,
Nice short text, one common problem is the use of a/an. You looked at the word 'university' and seen that it begins with a vowel and used 'an'. It is actually the sound of the word and not just the letter. 'University' begins with a /y/ sound so you should use 'a'
Best wishes
Bob
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Diary:009
This is my diary entry 009! If you have a free moment, could you correct my diary for me? Thank you so much!If you were granted one wish, what would you wish for?
→ If I were granted one wish, I would wish for a lot of money. I'm a university student now so I have a lot of free time and I want to travel to as many countries as possible for new experiences. However I don't have enough money to do so. That's why I would wish for a lot of money.
Very well written!
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