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Colombia flagFelipe Uribe
The letter to my teacher. Hi teacher, I want written about my vacations for you, in my last vacations, My brothers and my went to Zipaquira because my dad was birthday, he was sixty old years​, it was a day very funny because never before we are gather. I remember we went to Bogotá also we went to cinema but the movie was very bad, also we went to the Termaneles in Tabio - Cundinamarca but I don't liked beacuse the site is very small, very expensive and there were many people then we went to search eat and find a restaurant very good after we went to home, the next day we went to Neusa lake and we walked around to lake, this lake is awesome and beautiful but I very sad because the forest was cut. The next day everybody to cooking Natilla of corn and Buñuelos and it was very difficult because by cold and rain, this was a very funny weekend. For my next vacations my girlfriend and my will go to San Blas Islands in Panama, these beach is very amazing because your sea it is crystalline.

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The letter to my teacher.

Hi/Dear teacher,

I want to write about my vacation to you. For my/During my last vacation, my brothers and I went to Zipaquira because it was my dads birthday and he was sixty years old (or did he turn 60?)​. It was a very fun day because we never got together (like this) before. I remember we went to Bogotá and we went to the cinema/the movies but the movie was very bad. We also went to the Termaneles in Tabio - Cundinamarca but I didnt liked it beacuse the site was very small, very expensive and there were many people. Then we went to look for something to eat and found a very good restaurant. After that we went to home. The next day we went to Neusa lake and we walked around the lake. This lake is awesome and beautiful but I was very sad because the forest was cut. The next day everybody went to cook/make corn natilla and buñuelos and it was very difficult because of the cold and rain. This was a very funny weekend.
For my next vacation, my girlfriend and I will go to San Blas Islands in Panama, the beach there is very amazing because the sea it is crystalline.

Notes:

Funny means something that makes you laugh.
Fun is something that you enjoyed.
In English the adjective goes before the noun.
Pay attention to the tenses! :)

Hope this helps!



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