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Admission to the university is an important event in a school-leaver's life. This year I took a few exams, passed it successfully and finished my school. So I had to choose where I want to continue my education.
Since the 10th grade I want to be an economist. This profession is very important and useful in the modern wolrd because Russia becomes an influent player on the global market, many foreign countries want to collobarate and trade with it. That is why I decided to enter this University.
This university is one of the best university at the Urals. It trains more than 17000 students. The academic staff has 465 lecturers including 65 Doctors and 240 Candidates of Science. It educates young specialists who will be able to work in economics and scince fileds. Here you can get Bachelor's , Master's degrees
The university has a lot of modern teaching facilities. It has a large library with many handbooks, textbooks, papers of Doctors and Candidates of Science, a sport complex where you can try different kinds of sport, computer classes. Every auditory is well-equiped with technics that help students to study.
Now I am a fisrt-year student. I come from a small town of Sverdlovsk region so I had to adapt in new life conditions. The university helps with it. The atmosphere here is very peaceful and quite. All the students and professors are friandly and ready to help you in any case. Also, The university has many clubs and scientific societies where I can fine and meet new people with similar interests.
Also, the university has a great opportunity to learn foreign languages. As for me I liked to study English at school. And I was very happy to know that I will continue to improve my English here.
I don't regret that I choose this university. I like to study here. Hope my university life will be very interesting
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Please, help me with my text. Correct the mistakes :)
Admission to the university is an important event in a school-leaver's life. This year I took a few exams, passed it successfully and finished my school. So I had to choose where I want to continue my education.Since the 10th grade, I want to be an economist. This profession is very important and useful in the modern world because Russia becomes an influent player on the global market, many foreign countries want to collaborate and trade with it. That is why I decided to enter this University.
This university is one of the best university at the Urals. It trains more than 17000 students. The academic staff has 465 lecturers including 65 Doctors and 240 Candidates of Science. It educates young specialists who will be able to work in economics and science fields. Here you can get Bachelor's , Master's degrees
The university has a lot of modern teaching facilities. It has a large library with many handbooks, textbooks, papers of Doctors and Candidates of Science, a sports complex where you can try different kinds of sport, computer classes. Every auditory is well-equipped with technics that help students to study.
Now I am a first-year student. I come from a small town of Sverdlovsk region so I had to adapt to new life conditions. The university helps with it. The atmosphere here is very peaceful and quite. All the students and professors are friendly and ready to help you in any case. Also, The university has many clubs and scientific societies where I can find and meet new people with similar interests.
Also, the university has a great opportunity to learn foreign languages. As for me I liked to study English at school. And I was very happy to know that I will continue to improve my English here.
I don't regret that I choose this university. I like to study here. Hope my university life will be very interesting
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