My very first interview (corrections please)
Yesterday I had my very first interview. It was a very nice experience. Initially I was little nervous. But it went really well. It long for 45 minutes. They were totally giving expressions like they are not at all impressed by my performance. They told me to wait outside for sometime. After 15min they called me and said that they really liked my performance and I also got selected. I was Very excited but the sad part is my mom dad didn't allowed me to join that job because it was too far from my home. I was little angry but there is nothing I can do now. So I started preparing for another job.
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My very first interview (corrections please)
Yesterday I had my very first interview. It was a very nice experience. Initially I was little nervous. But it went really well. It long for 45 lasted forty-five minutes. They were totally giving the expressions like that they are were not at all impressed by my performance. They told me to wait outside for a while. sometime. After 15min fifteen minutes, they called me and said that they really liked my performance and I also got that I had been selected. I was Very very* excited but the sad part is my mom dad didn't allowed me to join accept** that job offer because it was too far from my home. I was little angry but there is nothing I can do now. So I started preparing for another job interview.Nice! It's unfortunate that your parents vetoed the job ("veto" is a cool word, by the way), but I can understand. The important thing is that a good interview experience probably helped your self-confidence, and the next interview(s) will go even better!
When writing numbers (especially in formal writing), you should spell out the whole number as long as you can do it in one or two words. (So "ninety-nine" should be spelled out, but "one hundred and one" should be written as "101")
* Did you write "very" with a large "V" intentionally? If you want to emphasize "very" you could use italics (except that I don't think you can in an italki notebook). But "very" is a good enough word on it's own.
** Instead of "join that job" it's better to say "accept that job offer."
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My very first interview (corrections please)
Yesterday I had my very first interview. It was a very nice experience. Initially I was little nervous. But it went really well. It long for 45 minutes. They were totally giving expressions like they are not at all impressed by my performance. They told me to wait outside for sometime. After 15min they called me and said that they really liked my performance and I also got selected. I was Very excited but the sad part is my mom dad didn't allowed me to join that job because it was too far from my home. I was little angry but there is nothing I can do now. So I started preparing for another job.4th sentence should be: it lasted for 45 minutes
8th sentence: I was very excited but the sad part is my mom and dad did not allow.................
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Yesterday I had my very first interview. It was a very nice experience. Initially I was a little nervous, but it went really well. It was 45 minutes long. They were totally giving expressions like they were not impressed by my performance. They told me to wait outside for sometime. After 15min they called me and said that they really liked my performance and I also got selected. I was very excited but the sad part is my mom and dad didn't allow me to accept that job because it was too far from my home. I was a little angry but there is nothing I can do now. So I started preparing for another job.Want to progress faster?
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