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Please correct this sentence!! I don't know I had better tell you this things. I decided that I am going to study abroad while a year. I have losed way for a long time. becouse I no longer understand what's right choice for me. It is the advantages and disadvantages. but I think I should do the things I want to do and I can only do now despite the fact I may be afraid of what other people might think when I do it. and "YOLO"that my friend teached encourage me. So I am going to study abroad for toronto,CANADA. Of couse I go to study English,but it allows me expose myself to these defferent perspective. Anyway, I try to do without thiking deeply.

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I don't know if I should I had better tell you this things.
I decided that I am going to study abroad while for a year.
I have losed way for a long time because I no longer understand what's right choice for me. [?? You've lost time? You've lost your way? You've felt lost? You didn't know what to do?]

It is the advantages and disadvantages, but I think I should do the things I want to do and I can only do now despite the fact I may be afraid of what other people might think when I do it. [Not clear what you're saying. Below is a guess]

There are advantages and disadvantages, but I think I should do what I want even if I may be afraid of what other people might think.


and "YOLO" that my friend teached encourage me. [your friend is a teacher? Or he taught you about YOLO?]

So I am going to study abroad for toronto,CANADA. in Toronto, Canada.


Of couse I go to study English,but it allows me expose myself to these defferent perspective.
Anyway, I try to do without thiking deeply.

Of course I'll study English, but it will also expose me to different perspectives.
Anyway, I'll do what I can without worrying about it too much.


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Please correct this sentence!!

I don't know if I had better tell you this these things.
I decided that I am going to study abroad while  for a year.
I have losed lost my way for a long time.
Becouse I no longer understand what's the right choice for me.
It is the advantages and disadvantages.
But I think I should do the things I want to do and I can only do now despite the fact that I may be afraid of what other people might think when I do it.
and "YOLO"that my friend teached taught me encouraged me.
So I am going to study abroad for in Toronto,Canada.
Of couse I go to study English,but it allows me expose myself to these defferent different  perspectives.
Anyway, I try to do without thiking thinking too deeply.
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Please correct this sentence!!

I don't know whether i should tell you these things.
I have made decision to study abroad for a year.
I have lost my way for a long time.
because I have no longer understood what's the right choice for me.
There are advantages and disadvantages.
but I think I should do what I want to and I can only do now despite the fact that I am afraid of what other people might think.
And "YOLO"that my friend having taught me encouraged me.
So I am going to study abroad in Toronto,CANADA.
Of couse the fact that I will study English, which also allows me to expose myself to these different perspectives is unavoidable.
Anyway, I will try to do without thinking too deeply.
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Don't do things just because of "YOLO". Do them because you want to. Good luck.

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