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Yesterday was the first day i went to the uni after a very long sembreak. The weather was very nice. The sky looked so blue, the cloud looked so white, and the sun spread its light everywhere so perfect. I missed the weather like this since 2 weeks ago. I meant, yeah raining season had started here since 2 weeks ago, and yesterday was the first day I didn’t see rain. I spent most of my sembreak only at home. I was really bored, but finally i was very happy because i met my lovely friends again yesterday. I truly missed them so much. I missed their smiles, their jokes, also how we spent many times only to discuss about what and where we should lunch together.
I had 2 classes yesterday, they were Library Management in Primary School at 2 pm, and then Special Needs Children Education at 4 pm. Both of those subjects were the extra subjects that i took this semester. I came to the uni an hour before class started. My friends wondered because i usually always came late. They said (exactly teased me) that i showed them the new spirit of Diah after a very long sembreak : |
Library Management in Primary School was an interesting subject. The lecturer was also so kind, she had a very nice smile. I usually saw her at uni, but yesterday was the first day she teached in my class. The class was very full. She mixed 2 classes yesterday. So there were about 60 students in the class. Most of us were sleepy, not because our lecturer and the materials were bored, but i thought that her teaching's time had the same time with our nap time.
After class finished, my friends and i waited for the next lecturer. But many of my friends who we knew that they also took the same subject like us went home because they said there was no information about that lecturer would attend or not. Then my friends and i moved in a place near park area to talk about should we go home also or wait about 30 minutes again. After we discussed about what if that lecturer came and we had been on the way to home, or maybe we waited but that lecture didn't come, in the end we decided to go home also like our others friends hihhi. I was very happy yesterday. I truly cannot wait to meet them again on Friday Inshallah ^_^
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Library Management in Primary School was an interesting subject. The lecturer was also so kind, she had a very nice smile. I often see her at uni, but yesterday was the first day she taught in my class. The class was very full. She combined two classes yesterday, so there were about 60 students in the class. Most of us were sleepy, not because our lecturer and the materials were boring, but I thought that her class time coincided with with our nap time.
After class finished, my friends and I waited for the next lecturer. But many of my friends who we knew that they also took the same subject like us went home because they said there was no information about whether that lecturer would attend or not. Then my friends and I moved to a place near a park area to talk about whether we should go home also, or wait about 30 more minutes. After we discussed about what if that lecturer came and we had gone home, or maybe if we waited but that lecturer didn't come, in the end we decided to go home also like our others friends hihhi. I was very happy yesterday. I truly cannot wait to meet them again on Friday Inshallah ^_^
-Always, always capitalize the personal pronoun 'I' :)
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Back to University Life
Yesterday was the first day I went to the university after a very long semester break. The weather was very nice. The sky looked so blue, the clouds looked so white, and the sun spread its light everywhere so perfectly. I missed having weather like this for the last two weeks. I meant, yeah rainy season started here two weeks ago, and yesterday was the first day I didn’t see rain. I spent most of my semester break only at home. I was really bored, but finally I was very happy because I met my lovely friends again yesterday. I truly missed them so much. I missed their smiles, their jokes, and also how we spent many times just discussing about what and where we should have lunch together.I had two classes yesterday, they were Library Management in Primary School at 2 pm, and then Special Needs Children Education at 4 pm. Both of those classes were the extra subjects that I took this semester. I came to the university an hour before class started. My friends were surprised because I usually always come late. They said (teased me, really) that I showed them the new spirit of Diah after a very long break : |
-Avoid using slang shortcuts (uni, sembreak) in an essay.
-Spell out numbers less than ten ('two'), unless you are giving the time (2 pm is ok).
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Back to University Life
Yesterday was the first day I went to the university after a very long semester break. The weather was very nice. The sky looked so blue, the clouds looked so white, and the sun spread its light everywhere. It was so perfect. I missed having weather like this in the last two weeks. I mean, yeah rainy season had started here two weeks ago, and yesterday was the first day I didn’t see rain. I spent most of my semester break only at home. I was really bored, but finally I was very happy because I met my lovely friends again yesterday. I truly missed them so much. I missed their smiles, their jokes, also how we spent many times just discussing about what and where we should have lunch together.I had two classes yesterday, they were Library Management in Primary School at 2 pm, and then Special Needs Children Education at 4 pm. Both of those subjects were the extra subjects that I took this semester. I came to the university an hour before class started. My friends were surprised because I usually always come late. They said (teased me really) that I showed them the new spirit of Diah after a very long semester break : |
Library Management in Primary School was an interesting subject. The lecturer was also so kind, she had a very nice smile. I often saw her at university, but yesterday was the first day she taught in my class. The class was very full. She mixed two classes yesterday, so there were about 60 students in the class. Most of us were sleepy, not because our lecturer and the materials were boring, but I thought that her class time coincided with our nap time.
After class finished, my friends and I waited for the next lecturer. But many of my friends who we knew that they also took the same subject like us went home because they said there was no information about whether that lecturer would attend or not. Then my friends and I moved to a place near a park area to talk about whether we should go home also, or wait about 30 more minutes. After we discussed whether that lecturer would come and we had been on the way to home, or maybe we waited but that lecture didn't come, in the end we decided to go home also like our others friends hihhi. I was very happy yesterday. I truly cannot wait to meet them again on Friday Inshallah ^_^
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