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Interview Q&A: Tell me about yourself My Chinese name is Yang, but you can call me Carl. I'm from China. I have been a software developer for 5 years, and I enjoy coding. I want to go to America to learning Big Data at this university, and I would like to find a job in America. Working at Google as a Big Data engineer is my dream job. I enjoy programming computer software, I published several apps to the app store by myself, I enjoy getting emails from people who are using my app, and they told me they love my apps, and they also have given me some great suggestions about how to improve the apps. I have gotten a lot of great ideas from them. Hi guys, I'm looking for the language partners, if you speak English and you are learning Chinese, contact me! my skype: backslash112, and my wechat: hi_yangcun

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Interview Q&A: Tell me about yourself

My Chinese name is Yang, but you can call me Carl. I'm from China.
I have been a software developer for 5 years and I enjoy coding. (You don't need a comma "," here)
I want to go to America to learn big data at this a university and I would like to find a job in America. (Removed "this" because "this" would refer to a university that you've already mentioned)
Working at Google as a big data engineer is my dream job.
I enjoy programming computer software,
I published several apps to the app store by myself.
I enjoy getting emails from people who are using my app and they told me they love my apps. 
They also have given me some great suggestions about how to improve the apps. (This was a very long run-on sentence so I broke it into multiple sentences. 把太多句子连起来了所以帮你把它们拆开)
I have gotten a lot of great ideas from them.

Hi guys, I'm looking for the language partners. If you speak English and you are learning Chinese, contact me!
my skype: backslash112, and my wechat: hi_yangcun

Keep at it! If you have already developed some applications by yourself then odds are very good that big technology companies will notice you.

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Interview Q&A: Tell me about yourself

My Chinese name is Yang, but you can call me Carl. I'm from China.
I have been (working as ) a software developer for 5 years, and I enjoy coding. ( A comma here is not wrong for the  sentence after the conjunction "and" is still independent, albeit a short one, which is why some writers see it as unnecessary. But it is still correct)

I hope/want/ to go to America to study big data at this a university, after which and I would like to have/find/ a job in America.( You go to a university to study, not to learn -- to study means to learn by attending classes, reading books, etc., especially at school or university, while to learn is just to gain knowledge by being trained or taught by anyone.> I have learned a lot by studying hard . I would like to have --and not to find-- because it more direct to the point, though it's still good)

Working at Google as a big data engineer is my dream job.
I enjoy programming computer softwares, and
I have published several apps to the app store, apps that were created solely by me.
I enjoy getting emails from people who are using my app,
and they have told me ( that)they love my apps, even with some of them
and they also have giving  me some great suggestions about how to improve on them apps.
I have had/ gotten/ a lot of great ideas from them.

> You should use the present perfect tense ( I have) instead of the past tense because, whatever it is, it was  valid then ( in the past) as it is now: you may continue to make apps, and people may still tell and give you suggestions later on. " Improve on" is a phrasal verb that means to make something better than before. 'Gotten" is an American lingo.

Hi guys, I'm looking for the language partners. So, if you speak English and you are learning Chinese, please contact me.
My skype: backslash112, and my wechat: hi_yangcun

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