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IETLS - Simulation Dear James, My name is Danilo Martins and I contracted your service to help me out to find an intensive specialization course and accommodation. The course is paid by my own and I expect to get the most out of this studies. But in order to achieve this, I need a comfortable environment to be able to focus on the matter of my course. I arrived 3 days ago and my course started right away. The accommodation is not bad, it is close to the school, the neighborhood is calm, they offered breakfast and there is a good restaurant nearby with a reasonable price. However, a big issue is making my goal harder to achieve. When I contracted your service I did let you know that I needed a bedroom not so soft due to my backbone problem. Without a bedroom like this, my spine pains all day long and so that I can’t concentrate as much as I wish. I have already talked to the owner of the hotel but he said all bedroom are the same and so that they can’t do anything. Given that, I wonder if you could move my accommodation to the hotel in the opposite side of the street. I already checked with them and they have the bedroom that I need to my back. I am counting on you and I am looking forward to hearing back. Thank you in advance, Danilo Martins

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IETLS - Simulation

Dear James,

My name is Danilo Martins and I contacted* your service to help me find an intensive specialization course and accommodation. I will pay the course, myself, and I expect to get the most out of it. But in order to achieve this, I need a comfortable environment to be able to focus on the matter of my course.
I arrived 3 days ago and my course started right away. The accommodation is not bad. It is close to the school and the neighborhood is quiet. They offered breakfast and there is a good restaurant nearby with reasonable prices. However, a big issue is making my goal harder to achieve. When I contacted your service I told you that I needed a firm mattress on my bed due to my spinal problem. Without such a mattress or bed, my spine pains all day long so that I can’t concentrate as much as I would wish.
I have already talked to the owner of the hotel but he said that all his beds are the same and so he cannot do anything. Given that, I wonder if you could move my accommodation to the hotel on the opposite side of the street. I already checked with them and they have a suitable bed for my back.

I am counting on you and I am looking forward to your reply.

Thank you in advance,
Danilo Martins

*or 'contracted' ? The meanings are very different.

Very well written!

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