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Peru flagLiz Kelly
CORRECTION! Hi!, I hope someone can check my writing. Thanks. Thanks for your invitation, it’s always a pleasure to be here. First of all, I’m happy that you present this important topic in your Program because one of the biggest problems in our country is that we are facing a wave of crimes that is generating chaos in our society and can’t be controlled by our government. But, let's see what is hidden behind this situation and try to understand what is happening in Lima that the number of criminals are increasing nowadays. Let’s take a look at family and society, two principal aspects that I’d like to focus on and are really crucial to understand why criminals exist in our city.

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CORRECTION!

Hi!, I hope someone can check my writing. Thanks.


Thanks for your invitation. It’s always a pleasure to be here. First of all, I’m happy that you present this important topic in your Program because one of the biggest problems in our country is that we are facing a crime wave that is generating chaos in our society and can’t be controlled by our government. But, let's see what is hidden behind this situation and try to understand what is happening in Lima that the number of criminals are increasing nowadays. Let’s take a look at family and society; two principal aspects that I’d like to focus on and are crucial* to understand why criminals exist in our city.

*crucial is like 'on' or 'off'. The lamp is either on or off and not very off, or a little on etc. 

Very well written!

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