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THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MOUNTAIN IN MY MIND A few month ago, i traveled some countries in Europe with my mom.My mom had a trip in Europe for first time.We did't join a tour group so that i arranged a schedule by myself.The most impressive of country is Switzerland for us.We took a train to Jungfrau.When we were on train,we see lot of amazing views,as like a big lake,wood houses.After an hour,we arrived in Grindweld which is in half mountain. we stayed here for fives days.My mom and me think there is wonderland because Janfraug ahead front of our hostel. We saw lots of mountains connect together and cover a snow on the top.In Grindwald is also nice place. There are lots of pretty wood houses around grass and forest.Wtook a cable car to the first mountain and took a train to Jungfrau. The scenery is so amazing everywhere.It is so natural and comfortable place.I have never been .My mom and me could't forget the goat walk free and super huge mountain. One of thing, we also keep remember everything in Switzerland is super expensive.

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THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MOUNTAIN IN MY OPINION   /  THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MOUNTAIN I HAVE EVER SEEN

A few months ago, I traveled to some countries in Europe with my mom.  It was the first time my mom had been to Europe.  We didn't join a tour group so that I arranged our schedule by myself.  The most impressive of country for us was Switzerland for us.  We took a train to Jungfrau.  When we were on the train, we saw lots of amazing views, such as like   a big lake, and wood houses.  After an hour, we arrived in Grindweld which is in half mountain.

We stayed there for five days.  My mom and I think that place is a wonderland because Janfraug was right in front of our hostel. We saw lots of mountains connected together and covered with snow on the top.  In    Grindwald is also a nice place.


Your story "paints a very vivid picture", well done!

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A few months ago,I traveled to some countries in Europe with my mom,It was the first time my mom had been to Europe.We did't join a tour group so I arranged our schedule by myself.The most impressive country for us was Switzerland.We took a train to Jungfrau.When we were on the train,we saw lots of amazing views,such as a big lake,and wood houses.After an hour,we arrived in GRINDWELD which is in half mountain. We stayed there for five days.My mom and I think that place us a wonderland because Jangfraug was right in front of our hostel.We saw lots of mountains connected together and covered with snow on the top.Grindwald is also a nice place.
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Thank you.I hope you can go there with your mom soon.By the way, i met lots of korean and they give us “辛”noodles. it is so nice.I think this place is popular in Korea now. : )
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Super beautiful, but super expensive, I agree with you! You are very lucky, I wish I could travel with my mom too :)

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