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Holidays with grandparents!! Hallo everyboy, this is my first written. I would be very thankful if someone would be so kind to correct my mistakes!! "Yesterday I brought my children to my parents. It's my first time, that I spend such a long time without my children!!! They always have in October fifteen days of school holidays and now that they are more grow, we have tought, they would have been able to spend some time together their grandparents without us parents. The journey by train was a little tiring because we had to change more than on train. The children were excited and they have been very happy to see their grandparents. I believe they will have a good experience, which they will always able to keep in their hearts!!!!"

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Holidays with grandparents!!

Hallo everybody, this is my first written essay. I would be very thankful if someone would be so kind to correct my mistakes!!
"Yesterday I brought my children to my parents. It's was the first time that I spent such a long time without them!!! They always have in October fifteen days of school holidays and now that they are older, we thought that they would have been able to spend some time together at their grandparents without us. The journey by train was a little tiring because we had to change more than once. The children were excited and they were very happy to see their grandparents. I believe they will have a good experience, which they will always be able to keep in their hearts!!!!"

Very well written!

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