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My life when i was a high school student.

Hi ! i (just ) want to tell you about my life when i was a high scool student in Japan. 
first, as soon as i always get up and eat breakfast ,i go to my school. Every day, I ate breakfast as soon as I got up, and then went to (my) school. (the story is in the past, so all the verbs should be past tense :) )
By the way...my mornings were sooooo hard. but, i love eating. so i always eat (ate) breakfast.
Second, after i arrived at (got to)  my school, i would spend the time speaking (chatting/talking) with my friends until the class started.
I didn't like English, so I didn't listen to my teacher. I think now (Thinking back,) I could (should) have studied English harder (back) then.
Anyway, after I taked  finished the  (you had more than one class I assume)class in the morning........lunch time~~~! (Anyway, after morning classes...lunch time!!!)
In (the) spring, the cherry trees blossoms (would) bloom in the schoolyard, so l would eat lunch with my friends in there.
When the wind blew, the petals fluttered as if they were dancing. so beautiful . and we enjoyed catching them.
sometimes, we eat them , but it tastes like nothing/doesn't taste like anything (but they have no taste), even though it smells sweets, like cherry blossoms (like a cherry tree) with a flaver of cherry tree.
why...??
what is that flavor (smell/scent)? I do not know.

although i wrote until this, i am so tired. I will stop to write notebook.hahaha (Ok, I'm tired now. I'm done writing this (notebook) entry) 

Well.. correct my notebook ,please!!!!!!

( Can someone correct my  notebook, please?!?!)

Even though you said ”please”, it's more polite to ask rather than command. ちょっと命令みたいです

お疲れ様です