My Morning(corrections please)
Good morning everyone, I know probably this time will not be morning in your country. It's 8:10am in India. Yes, I am from India. I just woke up and I thought it would be great to wish Italki friends a good and a healthy morning. Most of the Indians start their morning with tea or coffee. I am not addicted to any of them. Now I'll go for a morning walk which keeps me fresh whole day. See you guys later.
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My Morning(corrections please)
Good morning, everyone.,* I know that right now** it probably this time will not be morning in your country. It's 8:10 am in India. Yes, I am from India. I just woke up and I thought it would be great to wish my Italki friends a good and a healthy morning. Most of the Indians start their morning with tea or coffee. I am not addicted to any either of them. Now I'll go for*** a morning walk which keeps me fresh whole day. See you guys later.This is good writing. The English is very clear, and the grammar is nearly perfect. I'm making a few suggestions that might make the writing sound more like a native English speaker.
* Punctuation suggestion: "Good morning, everyone" is a good greeting. I would separate it from the rest of the writing. So I added a period (full-stop) and crossed-out the comma. You could even start the next sentence on a separate line.
** "Right now" vs "This time" - "This time" usually means "on this occasion" or "in this instance." Saying "right now" or "at this moment" (or even "as you are reading this") is a more natural way of saying "now."
*** "Now I'll go for . . ." - another way you can say this is, "Now I'm off for a morning walk. . ."
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