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Descriptive words Water in a dessert is a very scarce resource. Something the citizens of the United Arab Emirate's are very aware of. The abnormal wealth of the region, thanks to it's immense oil resources, makes it possible to alleviate the problem. Thanks to the emirs' investments, the minute nation of Dubai can now boast possesing some of the world's best, state-of-the art solutions to the problem of supplying a growing population of 2.5 million with their daily necessities of water for drinking, cleaning and industrial ventures. Only to keep the nation's spotless streets in immaculate shape, it is estimated that the fractional emirate consumes around xx cubic metres of water everyday, enough to irrigate an area of land sufficiently big to supply x thousand people. Note that nothing written here is based on any factual information. It is only written for language exercise purposes.

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Water in a dessert desert* is a very scarce resource. Something the citizens of the United Arab Emirate's are very aware of. The abnormal wealth of the region, thanks to it's its** immense oil resources, makes it possible to alleviate the problem. Thanks to the emirs' investments, the minute nation of Dubai can now boast possessing some of the world's best, state-of-the art solutions to the problem of supplying a growing population of 2.5 million with their daily necessities of water for drinking, cleaning and industrial ventures.

Only to keep the nation's spotless streets in immaculate shape, it is estimated that the fractional emirate consumes around xx cubic metres of water everyday, enough to irrigate an area of land sufficiently big enough to supply x thousand people.

Note that nothing written here is based on any factual information. It is only written for language exercise purposes.

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*dessert is for eating!

**it's=it is, its=possessive form of 'it'

Great work! Only very minor errors. Native speakers often make the same mistakes I've listed above

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