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My first diary Sep 7th, 2016 Today I decided to start keeping a diary. Im not sure when it ends (actually this one can be the last). I hope that it helps my English skills better. The thing is how I can know which sentence is correct or not. Ok let’s think even just trying like this can be a really big step for improving my English. Actually I’ve been known this way from a really long time ago. But Ive never tried before cuz I knew I would stop this really soon. That’s why I’ve never tried. Today I saw Youtube video saying that keeping a diary is gonna let u know what u want to say in English and u can catch some English phrases what u wanted to say easier. I totally agree with this. The reason I know some useful English prases and words is I really wanted to say it to my boy friend who is spanish. There are some moments I want to express my feeling through Korean cuz I couldn’t find exact expressions in English. So everytime I find some useful expressions that I need to momorize for using to my bf on the Internet, I write down on my notebook and try to remember these. It helps me a lot to express my opinions or feelings to my bf. Now that I begin keeping a diary, I want to believe its gonna be more helpful than ways I’ve tried before. Ok.. see u tomorrow my diary…

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My first diary

Sep 7th, 2016



Today I decided to start keeping a diary. Im not sure when it will end (actually this one could be the last). I hope that it helps my English skills to improve. The thing is how I can know which sentence is correct or not. ( You can know because teachers like me will help you! :) Ok let’s think even just trying like this could be a really big step for improving my English. Actually I’ve known about this way for a really long time ago. But Ive never tried before cuz I knew I would probably  stop this pretty soon. That’s why I’ve never tried. Today I saw a Youtube video saying that keeping a diary will let u know what u want to say in English and u can learn some English phrases for what you want to say easier. I totally agree with this. The reason I know some useful English phrases and words is I really wanted to say them to my boy friend who is spanish. There are some moments where I wanted to express my feelings through Korean cuz I couldn’t find the exact expressions in English. So every time I find  useful expressions that I need to memorize for using them with my bf on the Internet, I write them down in my notebook and try to remember these. It helps me a lot with expressing my opinions or feelings to my bf. Now that I've begun keeping a diary, I want to believe its gonna be more helpful than ways I’ve tried before. Ok.. see u tomorrow my diary…


This was a great first entry, hanata, and I really liked reading it. You made very few errors and seem to have a really strong grasp of English! I hope this one isn't the last. I wish you the best of luck with English- you're doing a wonderful job with it already!

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