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What do you feel? When people leave you what do you feel? I always swear to myself not to get used to people, but every time I mess up. I learned to let them go, however it is extremely difficult to get rid of inner emptiness after all. Is it easy to forgive yourself your own mistakes? In my opinion, it is impossible. If you hurt someone, be ready that you will be betrayed as well. I caught my boomerang. There is only one question: Will I be able to forget all consequnces and repeat my mistake again?

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What do you feel?

When people leave, you what do you feel? I always swear to promise myself not to get used to people, but every time I mess up.
I learned to let them go, however it is extremely difficult to get rid of inner emptiness after all. Is it easy to forgive yourself for your own mistakes? In my opinion, it is impossible. If you hurt someone, be ready that you will be betrayed as well.
I caught my boomerang. There is only one question: Will I be able to forget all consequences and repeat my mistake again?

Печальный какой текст :( But it is written really well, I just make a stylistic change (swear -> promise), corrected a typo and added a preposition. Honestly, English prepositions are hell... This one is easy to remember though, you forgive someone (no preposition) FOR something.

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What do you feel?

When people leave you what do you feel? I always swear to myself not to get used to people, but every time I try to resist this, I mess up.
I learned to let them go, however.  It is extremely difficult to get rid of the inner emptiness after it is all over.

Is it easy to forgive yourself for your own mistakes? In my opinion, it is virtually impossible.

Also, if you hurt someone, be prepared. They might betray you as well.
I got caught in my own boomerang once. I have only one question about it: Will I be able to forget all the consequences;  then be hopelessly guilty of repeating my mistake all over again?

That's how I feel!

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What do you feel?

When people leave you what do you feel? I always swear to myself not to get used to people, but every time I mess up.
I learned to let them go, however it is extremely difficult to get rid of inner emptiness after all. Is it easy to forgive yourself for your own mistakes? In my opinion, it is impossible. If you hurt someone, then be ready that you will be betrayed as well.
I caught my boomerang. There is only one question: Will I be able to forget all consequnces consequences and repeat my mistake again?


Hi there are some structures used here that aren't exactly the way a native speaker would say them, however they are not "incorrect". The idea is understood.

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