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Jacob GM.

A try at Informative Writing 源氏構造電子・見つかるに電子雲。・表層は、価電子です。・負の電荷陽子・中に原子核。・正電機 English Translation(or atleast what I want it to say): Atomic Structure Electrons - found in the outer layer - Outer is the valence electron - Negative Charge Protons - Inside the atomic nucleus - Positive Charge I was going to continue with the neutrons, and other information but I want to know if I have the right thing going. (I am worse at grammar, so PLEASE tell me everything I am doing incorrectly.)

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源氏構造
→原子構造 or 原子の構造（Structure of Atoms）

・見つかるに電子雲。
→外がわの層（そう）で見つかる
outer → 外がわ
layer → 層

・表層は、価電子です。
→（いちばん）外がわの電子は、価電子です。

・中に原子核。
→原子核の中

In many cases, the order of the words in English and Japanese is opposite.
In Japanese, English prepositions often come after nouns, like:

inside the box　→　はこの中に
under the table　→　テーブルの下に

Also, objects are before verbs, like:

find the key　→　かぎを見つける
answer the question　→　しつもんに答える

Not only atomic structure but Japanese structure is interesting, isn't it?

thanks for the suggestion! I did it, thanks in advance

Hi. Nice try! Would you write an English version of the sentences? It will help us to correct your Japanese more precisely.

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