TV programme about language college (Proposal Practice)
Dear Ms Linehan,
As an answer to your email, I'm going to speak here students' committee mind, hoping it helps you to organise the programme.
You said we only have space for two or three ideas. Following this, we thought that -among the topics you listed- talking about the Different Departments seems uninteresting. Also, due to the limitations, making the most of the time we have by mixing topics when possible will help to not leave anything behind.
Our common opinion was that Students should be the common thread and interviews to them came up as a fantastic way to transmit what studying here is like. By this, the History of the college can be summed up in a few minutes and also Accommodations, which could be reviewed by asking some of us to show ours so you will have a more trustful report.
Besides this, all members of the committee agreed that Social Life topic could make a great ending. Drama and music classes as well as many sports are offered here, which can be a perfect teaser to attract new students and close the programme with the real energy of this college, too.
I hope all this helps your struggle. Whatever more I can help you with, I am at your entire disposition.
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TV programme about language college (Proposal Practice)
Dear Ms Linehan,As an answer to your email, I'm going to speak address here what the students' committee's feedback, hoping it help you to organise the programme.
You said mentioned {said is OK, but mentioned in more professional} we only have space for two or three ideas. Following Based on this, we thought that - among the topics you listed - talking about the Ddifferent Ddepartments seems uninteresting may not be the ideal approach {'seems uninteresting' is gramatically correct, but may cause offense}. Due to the limited time, making the most of the time we have by mixing topics when possible will help to not leave anything behind. Our common opinion was that students should be the thread that connects everything, and interviews to with them came up as a fantastic way to transmit what studying here is like. By this, the Hhistory of the college can be summed up itin a few minutes and also Aaccommodations can be described, which could be reviewed by asking some of us to show ours housing so you will have a more trustful trustworthy -report about this college's reality.
Besides this, all members of the committee agreed that the Social Life topic could make a great ending. Drama and music classes and many sports are offered here, which can be a perfect teaser to attract new students and also make and end to the programme with which shows the real energy of this college.
I hope all of this helps your struggle {too strong a word, I suggest 'decision' or 'analysis'}. Whatever more I can help you with, I am at your entire disposition.
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It seems strange that you would start off your response by telling the her what the "least" interesting idea of hers was. It might offend someone.
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