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我的日常 的事情 生活
在這篇作文中,我會叙述(or 談談) 我的日常。我每天都從早上 從 9點到10點之間起床。
然後我吃早餐,例如一碗麦片粥或麵包。(然後我會吃像是麥片粥或麵包的早餐)
之後我在叫做Anki的軟體學習幾個言語語言(日本語,中文,西班牙語)。(接著,我會在一個叫做Anki的軟體學日語、中文和西班牙語)
一般這件事需要差不多1個小時。(一般來說,我大概花一個小時在這個軟體上)
午餐後我開始在italki 的導師 從事教學工作。(吃完午餐後,我開始在italki(的網站)上家教)
My everyday life/daily schedule
In this entry, I will describe my day to day life. I wake up everyday between 9 and 10AM. Then I eat breakfast, for example cereals or bread. Afterwards I study different languages with a program called Anki. Generally, that takes about an hour. After lunch, I start working as a tutor on italki.
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PS
Though it's an entry, it feels like u are telling ur life to someone. So I try to revise some words and suggestions of sentences in ur article that ppl can read it in relaxed way. Not very formal. And also be smoothing. (Cus sometimes even the sentences are correct, the translations are not smoothing)
In this entry, I will describe my day to day life. I wake up everyday between 9 and 10AM. Then I eat breakfast, for example cereals or bread. Afterwards I study different languages with a program called Anki. Generally, that takes about an hour. After lunch, I start working as a tutor on italki.
日常的事情我的日常
My everyday life/daily schedule
In this entry, I will describe my day to day life. I wake up everyday between 9 and 10AM. Then I eat breakfast, for example cereals or bread. Afterwards I study different languages with a program called Anki. Generally, that takes about an hour. After lunch, I start working as a tutor on italki.
日常的事情
在這篇作文中我會叙述一些我的日常事情。我每天都是早上從9點到10點起床。然後我吃点儿早餐,例如一碗麦片粥或麵包。之後我在叫做Anki的軟體上學習幾個种语言言語(日本語,中文,西班牙語)。一般這件事需要差不多1個小時。午餐後我開始在italki的導師工作。My everyday life/daily schedule
In this entry, I will describe my day to day life. I wake up everyday between 9 and 10AM. Then I eat breakfast, for example cereals or bread. Afterwards I study different languages with a program called Anki. Generally, that takes about an hour. After lunch, I start working as a tutor on italki.
日常的事情
在這篇作文中我會叙述我的日常。我每天都早上都從9點到10點起床。然後我吃早餐,例如一碗麦片粥或麵包。之後我在叫做Anki的軟體學習幾個门言語语言(日本語,中文,西班牙語)。一般這件事需要差不多1個小時。午餐後我開始在italki的導師工作。My everyday life/daily schedule
In this entry, I will describe my day to day life. I wake up everyday between 9 and 10AM. Then I eat breakfast, for example cereals or bread. Afterwards I study different languages with a program called Anki. Generally, that takes about an hour. After lunch, I start working as a tutor on italki.
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