The book i read this weekend I bought the new book in this week.The name of book is called ''IN ORDER TO LIVE'', is talk about a girl have what kind of life north Korea and the proccessing about she

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The book i read this weekend I bought the new book in this week.The name of book is called ''IN ORDER TO LIVE'', is talk about a girl have what kind of life north Korea and the proccessing about she ran away from her country.When i started to read this , i can't stop reading.I feel incredible about her life without enough food and she faces lots of horrible thing when she thought she run away from her country ,anything would be all right. However the truth always broke the beautiful imagination.I think she is really brave . she broke any danger circumstance.Finally,she succeed to run away from her country.I can't image how much stress would she face.and she also need to adapt new life in south korea.In addition,She studied hard to catch up other sutdents as like her age.Accidentally, she is speaker ,talks about The running persons with human right .As i finished book, i review my life when i was young what i was doing.

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The book i read this weekend

I bought the a new book in this week. The first time you mention something, use "a". After that, use "the". 如："I saw a dog today. The dog was mean." The name of the book is called ''IN ORDER TO LIVE'', OR: The book is called "In order to live" and it is talk about OR: and it talks about a girl have what kind of life north Korea and the proccessing about she ran away from her country the kind of life a girl has in North Korea, and the processes involved in running away from the country. When After I started to read this , I can't couldn't stop reading. I feel incredible about can hardly imagine "I feel incredible"=我现在觉得很好 her life without enough food and she faces lots of horrible thing all the horrible things she faced. 如果你用连词如“and”或“or”, 可以说“名词and名词”，也可以说“分句and分句”，可是不可以说“名词and分句”。 “her life without food” 是名词短语，“she faces lots of horrible things”却是分句，不可以放在一起。When she thought she decided to run away from her country, she thought that anything everything would be all right.

The book i read this weekend

I bought the new book in this week.The name of the book is called ''IN ORDER TO LIVE'', it is about a girl who has some kind of life in north Korea and the story about how she rans away from her country.When i started reading this , i couldn´t stop reading.I felt incredible about her life without enough food and her facing a lots of horrible things when she thought, that if she runs away from her country , everything will be alright. However the truth/reality always broked the beautiful imagination.I think she was really brave . she got through any danger circumstance.Finally,she succeeded to run away from her country.I couldn´t imagine how much stress she had to face.and she also needed to adapt to a new life in south korea.In addition,She studied hard to catch up with other students at the same age like her .Accidentally, she becomes a speaker ,thattalks about The running persons with human rights .As i finished the book, i reviewed my life when i was young and what i did.

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However, the truth always broke the beautiful imagination destroys our beautiful dreams. I think she is really brave. She broke free from any all her dangerous circumstances. Finally, she succeeded to run in running away from her country. I can't image how much stress would she faced, and she also needed to adapt to her new life in South Korea. In addition, she studied hard to catch up with/to other sutdents as like her age. "students her age", "people his age" 等 are set phrases. Accidentally, she is Without planning to, she becomes a speaker, and talks about The running persons with human right smuggling people to places where they can have human rights. As I finished the book, I reviewed my life when I was young and wondered what I was doing.

Thank you correct my article. I learnt a lot. I bought a new book this week.The book is called ''IN ORDER TO LIVE'',and it is about the kind of life a girl has in South Korea and the processes involved in running away from the country.When i started to read this,i couldn't stop reading.I can't hardly imagine her life without food and all horrible things she faced.When she decided to run away from her country and she thought everything would be all right. However, the truth always destroys our beautiful dreams.I think she is really brave.She broke free from dangerous circumstances.Finally she succeed in running away from her country,I can't image how much she faced.and she also need to adapt to her new life in South Korea.In addition,she studied hard to catch up with other student her age.Without planning to,She becomes a speaker,and talks about smuggling people to place where they can have human rights.As i finished the book,i reviewed my life when I was yoong and I wondered what I was doing.

PART 2

Finally, she succeeded to run away from her country. I can't image how much stress she had to face and she also needed to adapt to a new life in South Korea. In addition, she studied hard to catch up with the other students sutdents as like her age. Accidentally, she becomes a speaker that talks about the people who run away to where they can have their basic human rights running persons with human right. As I finished the book, I reviewed my life when I was young and what I was doing did.

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